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msgenevieve

India - Michael/Sara (Chapter Three)

Sep 09, 2007 00:00

Title: India - Chapter Three
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 4,034 words
Rating: NC-17 for Sexual Situations.
Summary: All good things come to those who wait.
Author's Note:This story is part of the Full Circle series. It takes place between the 'end' and the 'epilogue' of Safe ( Read more... )

prison break, michael/sara, india, safe house, full circle

Comments 17

elizabethb September 8 2007, 15:38:33 UTC

yay first reviewer...lovely ficy and chap. i just love how you make there conversations so normal now. totally how see them in my head.

msgenevieve September 9 2007, 05:12:25 UTC

Thank you!

linzi20 September 8 2007, 15:41:42 UTC

Oh ms.g., this is just beautiful. I loved the conversation about the toes, and I loved how you captured both the oldness and newness of Michael and Sara at the same time (if that makes sense). I'm loving this story.

I needed this today! Thank you.

*hugs*

msgenevieve September 9 2007, 05:15:17 UTC

I loved the conversation about the toes, and I loved how you captured both the oldness and newness of Michael and Sara at the same time (if that makes sense).

Thank you! I'm a sucker for showing here/now type things, and these two give me so much fodder for that. *g*

*hugs you back*

recycledfaery September 8 2007, 16:01:39 UTC

London Taxi with disinterested cabbie, cold London air, Heathrow. Ahh thank you! LOL

This is a lovely fic.

msgenevieve September 9 2007, 05:16:42 UTC

Hee, your icon. *g*

I'm glad you're enjoying it. There's several more chapters to come, lol!

flatlined September 8 2007, 17:08:38 UTC

Just what I needed!

amazing chapter!!

♥

msgenevieve September 9 2007, 05:17:09 UTC

Thank you!

wrldpossibility September 8 2007, 21:33:36 UTC

Definitely too much plot in this porn...it was wonderful! I admire the way you interweaved Michael's memory of that first hotel room to this one--Sara's inaccessibility then compared to the barriers that have been torn down now. I wonder if Sara thought of it, too. Even though this chapter was from Michael's perspective, I'd like to think so. Beautiful work, as always.

scribblecat September 8 2007, 23:16:19 UTC

Definitely too much plot in this porn...

*gigglesnorts*
Word.

msgenevieve September 9 2007, 05:18:14 UTC

*grins*

I admire the way you interweaved Michael's memory of that first hotel room to this one--Sara's inaccessibility then compared to the barriers that have been torn down now. I wonder if Sara thought of it, too. Even though this chapter was from Michael's perspective, I'd like to think so.

Well, I *am* switching POV back and forth, so you'll just have to wait and see. Heh. I'm so glad you're having fun reading this!