India - Michael/Sara (Chapter Three)

[msgenevieve]

Title: India - Chapter Three
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi
Pairing: Michael/Sara
Length: 4,034 words
Rating: NC-17 for Sexual Situations.
Summary: All good things come to those who wait.
Author's Note:This story is part of the Full Circle series. It takes place between the 'end' and the 'epilogue' of Safe

Comments

[scribblecat]

He was going to ask her! Ooh I need to not read your chapters until they are posted more often for that extra thrill factor over my morning coffee.

They are just so...in that place aren't they. Condsider me enthused! Nekst chapter plz.
*cuddles the writer*

[msgenevieve]

I'm glad it went well with your coffee, darling. *g*

They are just so...in that place aren't they?

Oh yes, indeedy.

[wrldpossibility]

Sorry, I know I'm posting twice, but I forgot to say that our Michael's genius brain is clearly slipping if he DIDN'T plan on the airline losing his luggage. I wish Michael HAD planned on that, so we could all be privy to his solution to that particular problem. *grin* (I hope you know I'm teasing...the line just made me laugh after losing luggage twice this summer.)

And I also loved the line about tattooing the house's floorplan to his back (and that Sara said "our" house). *sighs in mushy contentment*

[msgenevieve]

but I forgot to say that our Michael's genius brain is clearly slipping if he DIDN'T plan on the airline losing his luggage.

Hee! You're quite right, lol!

And I also loved the line about tattooing the house's floorplan to his back (and that Sara said "our" house).

Thank you. I wanted to link that back to "Sleeping with Ghosts" and Lincoln and Michael getting drunk on the beach around the bonfire. Oh, and yes, it's been a year, so Sara is quite comfy saying 'our' now. *g*

[msgenevieve]

Thanks! I think they're at the stage where they can say these things to each other - they just need to find the right time.

[sk56]

The sound of their conversation is dead on, and your exploration of their relationship continues to develop, but it's the details of place that really make this for me. The taxi ride is an excellent example of that -- clearly described but not belabored.