la dolce vita ~chapter 2~

[msdesireen]

Title: la dolce vita
Author: msdesireen
Characters: Akanishi, Kamenashi, Nakamaru, OC
Rating: PG-13 [for mentions of alcohol and hinted BL in later chapters]
Genre: Slice of life, AU
Beta by: myself?
Disclaimer: The plot is mine. The boys aren't.
Summary: La dolce vita, Italian for “the sweet life” or “the good life”, is something everyone would like to have. Of

Comments

[brindhakrishnan]

You have a very different style of writing and its refreshing to read. So technically all of these 4 people know each other... well are aware of each other atleast. I am now curious to know more about Desireen, well that's you right? why does she cry?

Thanks for sharing this, it has a unique start and am wondering what is going to come next.XD

[msdesireen]

Yes, in a sense all of them know each other.
About the girl, we share the same name, but we're different.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

[dori_liv]

nice second chapter. all the characters are relly starting to intersect now. i'm looking forward to seeing more!

[msdesireen]

Your comments mean a lot to me =)
I'm glad you're not turned off yet then...
thanks for commenting!

[r1k1t0]

Wow.. Different style for each character. It's very fun to read each one. :D
The interaction's good too. Hehehe.. Soon enough they will interact all together, I suppose? Hehe.
Thanks so much for sharing this. :D

[msdesireen]

I suppose. =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[randomicicle]

I like Jin being a barista &hearts.

And this one came out pretty nice. I like it. Like I said before, I like your style. And I'll be waiting for some more character building; so far, I love them.

[msdesireen]

I like Jin being a barista too, that's why I keep writing him as a barista.

I'm glad you think that it came out nicely.. Thanks for commenting!

[kk_me]

OMFGGG. Sway! That's been my favourite song since I was 13!! And Michael Buble is one of my favourite artists in this world~~ *fangirlss*

lately my brain has felt dead and unproductive, and even though it's early i feel as if it's 3 a.m

i love you, and you know that. please forgive me for my shitty comment this time. but i loved this. it feels so comfortable. i fall right into it, i love the way you portray the characters, and I have a bias for Nakamaru in this one, but to sum all them up in one word - intriguing.

thank you <33

[msdesireen]

His renditionof Sway is my all time favourite!!!
I love that song!!!! So yeah, since it's gonna be a Jazz bar, I need that song on!

Sorry for the late reply, I'm glad you like it. Your comment means so much to me crappy or not. XDDDD

I read your latest entry and it seems so much fun!^^