la dolce vita ~chapter 1~

[msdesireen]

Title: la dolce vita
Author: msdesireen
Characters: Akanishi, Kamenashi, Nakamaru, OC
Rating: PG-13 [for mentions of alcohol and hinted BL in later chapters]
Genre: Slice of life, AU
Beta by: myself?
Disclaimer: The plot is mine. The boys aren't.
Summary: La dolce vita, Italian for “the sweet life” or “the good life”, is something everyone would like to

Comments

[dori_liv]

I'm so glad you're writing again. You're so good at it.
When I read 'He didn't quite like the weather that day. He didn't mind it being all grey and gloomy' my first thought was something along the lines of 'jin doesn't like the rain but kame does'. then i remembered that actually that was from the brilliant starbucks fic you wrote, hehe. I was glad to see they are the same characters (i think) as in that. I really liked the strbucks pieces.

Also, I love the way you've introduced each character from the perspective of another. That was a great touch. It shows readers how other people see the character as well as what the character themselves think and I already feel like I know a lot about the them!

[msdesireen]

I'm a little rusty... >.< I think the Starbucks series is the epitome of my "writing career" so far. I'll keep trying my best to write more and to improve!

Hmm...I actually wanted to use the same characters but I didn't want this to interfere with the Starbucks series in any way, so well, they are similar but not quite the same. This Akanishi will be a tad more insecure and less sensitive. This Kamenashi will be more pro-active and sociable in a sense.

Look forward to future chapters, I'm so glad you like my fic =)

[notbyfar]

I'm really glad I've found this one~
It sounds a bit like a drama, this first chapter <3

Can't wait for the next onee, no pressure though :D

[msdesireen]

I'm glad you like the first one. Took me forever to write it, and I'm still not satisfied as of now, but didn't exactly know how I should go about making it better yet.

well, I hope future chapters will come out easily and look forward to it! =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!!! ^^

[randomicicle]

I quite like your style. Will be looking forward to the next one.

[msdesireen]

=) thank you for reading and commenting

[akameangel]

Wow this fic has my top 3 favourites from kattun. Though the story is simple and nothing much yet, the way you characterize them make me curious about how their path crosses and fall in love later.
Thanks for sharing. I will be looking forward to your updates.

[msdesireen]

lol...what an honor XD
I'm glad the lack of interesting events didn't bore you...
Thanks for commenting.

[kk_me]

I love Maru fics. They have a different feel to them. And I love this fic. You've managed to squeeze in a bar, a cafe, ramen shop all in one, somehow all linked together. I apologise for this comment lacking the beautiful insight and intelligence that's always in your comments... I'm not feeling too well right now, but as I had promised to read you, I popped by

[msdesireen]

sorry for the lack in insights while commenting on your recent fic. I enjoyed black cotton a hell lot though XDDD
I hope you're better already.
I'm still debating about Nakamaru falling in love with her. It is indeed strange and we've never seen this side of him have we? Well, I'll keep trying things out and talking with this certain maru to work something out.
Looking forward to future comments~ ^^