Pray, Move

[mscc6422]

Sitting on silence we both are,
Side by side, but a world apart,
Do you remember the first time we met?
Under the summer sun, among the crowd?
We found each other by chances,
Now you’re asking me to stop believing 
On miracles and other beings

We used to dance under the moonlight, 
We used to howl as we trace the dirt path 
In the middle of green forest,
We

Comments

[whipchick]

Love that you went with poetry for the first entry - nice rhythm!

[mscc6422]

Thank you... :) the topic kinda push me here... :P

[myrna_bird]

Nice effort.

[mscc6422]

thank you... :)

[static_abyss]

i loved the flow of this. great job :)

[mscc6422]

Thank you... I'm glad you like this..

[winterberries]

I really like that you chose to write a poem for this week. With so many contestants, it's nice to read something that stands out as unique.

[mscc6422]

Thank you... The topic just create this poem, thus push me to apply for this. I just hope my muse won't go too far until I finished with this idol thing... :)

[tjoel2]

"The hopes will grow with prayers and dreams,
The future will be reach by efforts and actions"

Love that part!

[mscc6422]

Thank you... I'm glad you like it...