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ms_shalimar

Shattered Dreams: If Only

Jan 09, 2008 12:00

Title: Shattered Dreams: If Only ( Read more... )

fanfic100, tony slattery, whose line, fanfic, shattered dreams, fandom, greg proops

Comments 6

telynmurali January 10 2008, 20:11:06 UTC

I wish you'd said yes.

Heartbreaking. ;_;

ms_shalimar January 11 2008, 09:26:50 UTC

*hugs*

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

eatyourfudge January 11 2008, 00:30:40 UTC

Greg sat stunned, telephone receiver dangling as the cord was trapped between his fingers. Through the speaker, a faint voice could still be heard, but Greg wasn't listening.
Great opening!

jealous that he hadn't been the one to play the role of saviour
<3

More please! :)

ms_shalimar January 11 2008, 09:27:46 UTC

Glad you enjoyed :D Thanks for reading.

Already started on the next part, still not 100% sure how it'll all end, but I shall see where the muses take me.

ally_pops June 17 2008, 20:37:48 UTC

That was amazing!! I loved the dialogue between the characters and the way you drew Greg!! :)

ms_shalimar June 20 2008, 10:25:37 UTC

Thank you :D It's always nice to get new comments so long after posting it. Glad you enjoyed :D There are three more parts if you're interested [/self-pimp]