Birthday! And fic! Birthday fic.

[mrspollifax]

Happy happy birthday to the excellent holdouttrout! I hope it's a wonderful day.

I come bearing (little bitty) fic for your birthday entertainment. :)

Title: Shine Tomorrow
Rating: Teen
Pairing: Sam/Jack (Jonah/Thera)
Episode: Beneath the Surface
Word Count: ~650
Summary: Sometimes Jonah feels like he shouldn't be watching her.
Warnings: None.

A/N:

Comments

[rgcraeg]

Oh man, I loved this. I too love BtS fics and this was fantastic. The way he knew he couldn't have her but not knowing why allowed him to see the ridiculousness of the feeling. And geez, He wants it, wants her, but when he thinks about that, thinks about touching her face and kissing her lips and whispering her name as he worships her body, it's too much. Break my heart!

Nicely done, per usual :)

[mrspollifax]

Yeah, it was definitely a fun/interesting idea to play with. I'm glad it seems to work. Thanks! :)

[wanderingsmith]

It's charming and sweet and more than a little ridiculous, and if he could just stop feeling like he didn't have a right to her, he'd have her in his arms right now.

very nice. there are so many angles to that ep, so many lenses to the characters... I like this. Jack both with and without the regs, struggling as much as he ever did, if for entirely different reasons

[mrspollifax]

Yes, I agree, lots of different and interesting ways to look at them and what might have been going on. I'm glad you liked this. Thanks!

[batgirl_forever]

Soooo pretty! It's what romance should be, not formulaic crap.

*contented sigh* If you ask any of my friends how I feel about romance novels, they'll tell you I hate them and the one time I had to read one for a publishing class I just about puked at the absolute fluffery.

But then I discovered SG-1, and Sam/Jack fics, and…it's like crack. Such…good…crack…

[mrspollifax]

Hee. Yeah, S/J definitely aren't your average, ordinary, sappy OTP, which is so much of what I love about them. Glad you are having fun with them. *g* And thanks!

[chozen_rogue]

Oh god, the last line is just so beautiful. I think this captures the feeling of Jonah/Thera perfectly!

[mrspollifax]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[aletheia08]

Oww ♥ This is beautiful!

[mrspollifax]

Thank you!