Birthday! And fic! Birthday fic.

[mrspollifax]

Happy happy birthday to the excellent holdouttrout! I hope it's a wonderful day.

I come bearing (little bitty) fic for your birthday entertainment. :)

Title: Shine Tomorrow
Rating: Teen
Pairing: Sam/Jack (Jonah/Thera)
Episode: Beneath the Surface
Word Count: ~650
Summary: Sometimes Jonah feels like he shouldn't be watching her.
Warnings: None.

A/N:

Comments

[nandamai]

I read this yesterday and loved it, then read it again today when you posted to the lists, and I love it more. Squee!

[mrspollifax]

*spams your flist* Hehe. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[talkofcake]

Oh God. The line about him not supposed to look at her. That was brilliant. LOVED this fic!

[mrspollifax]

Thank you very much!

[momm2five]

Maybe she's the reason he thinks he can remember the sun.

I love this line. And I love how you've mingled Jonah's feelings for Thera and Jack's memories of Sam, that she can't be his, he shouldn't look at her like *that*, but he still adores her. Awesome story! One of my top 5 favorite episodes.

[mrspollifax]

Yeah, it really informs so much of their relationship at that time for me. Glad you like this! Thanks.

[katcorvi]

Oh my...this fic is just so lovely. You done good.

Really, it's one of those that will settle in my brain and linger for a bit and when I think of BtS from this point forward, this fic will be part of what I love about that ep. Your Jack watching Sam and being captivated by her and the light of the factory and the warmth of the unseen sun and how that for him is the warmth of Sam...well, it's all so lovely.

[mrspollifax]

Thank you so much! :) I hadn't written any BtS-related fic before, so it was fun to think about how they might work. Glad you enjoyed it!

[bluewillowtree]

This is absolutely beautiful. I especially love the last line.

[mrspollifax]

Thank you!