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mrspollifax

Birthday! And fic! Birthday fic.

Jul 01, 2009 08:20

Happy happy birthday to the excellent holdouttrout! I hope it's a wonderful day.

I come bearing (little bitty) fic for your birthday entertainment. :)

Title: Shine Tomorrow
Rating: Teen
Pairing: Sam/Jack (Jonah/Thera)
Episode: Beneath the Surface
Word Count: ~650
Summary: Sometimes Jonah feels like he shouldn't be watching her.
Warnings: None.

A/N: ( Read more... )

stargate fics, fanfic, sam/jack, birthdays

Comments 53

binkii822 July 1 2009, 13:11:30 UTC

Beneath the Surface fic in one of my most favorite things! I loved the juxtapostion between his new found feelings for her and the inner knowledge she wasn't his.

Also, this bit made me smile!

When he lifts a hand, her smile shifts slightly; a question. He touches her cheek, and she blushes. The tips of his fingers chase the color across her skin; the soft pink only adds to the glow.

He leans in and brushes his lips against hers, then sits back to see her face. Impossibly, her smile is even brighter than before.

Maybe she's the reason he thinks he can remember the sun

Excellent job!

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 18:56:11 UTC

Yay! Thanks, glad you liked it. Had you seen any of this one? I actually can't remember, I've been running in so many directions lately. *g*

sharp2799 July 1 2009, 13:17:30 UTC

Ohhh. That's just lovely. He thinks of Sam as the sun....

This is so beautiful I'm not even going to ask for a smutty sequel.

meoinya July 1 2009, 18:02:26 UTC

- This is so beautiful I'm not even going to ask for a smutty sequel.

Can I, then? LOL!

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 19:00:36 UTC

*g*

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 18:58:11 UTC

I'm not even going to ask for a smutty sequel.

*is suspicious you have been replaced by pod person* ;) Thanks, I'm very glad you liked it.

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a_loquita July 1 2009, 13:47:08 UTC

Yay! It's so pretty! :)

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 18:58:43 UTC

:) Thanks again!

ziparumpazoo July 1 2009, 14:39:22 UTC

Oh my you've been busy lately. *g*
This is just the perfect analogy for love. And so pretty to boot.

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 19:00:17 UTC

I know, right? Me posting two fics in two days might be a sign of the end times or something. :) Anyway, thanks! I'm glad to hear this one works.

aurora_novarum July 1 2009, 15:35:10 UTC

Aw! I love the switching between the brainwashing and his real thoughts and being grounded (or ungrounded?) by Sam and...

A lovely lovely moment for them.

mrspollifax July 1 2009, 19:04:13 UTC

Oh, thank you! I liked the idea that things would be a little muddled in all of their heads. I'm very glad that it worked! :)