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[mrs_norrington]

Title: Andrew's Vivid Fantasy Life
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: Gillington
(Author's Note: I don't like my writing style at all, but I like the idea of the piece. I used to think I could write elegantly, but at the moment that seems to be lost. I am however yielding to the muses and letting them cuddle and do what they want.)

The first breath he took upon

Comments

[pirate4evrnavy2]

*snofel* Andrew's line is amazing!

And this is so sweet and fluffly done. Really, I think you're over critical of yourself. This fic is like puffy white clouds and chocolate. It doesn't get much better! Believe me, it's been a while since I've read decent POTC fic.

[lucid_dreamer_]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[wicked_jade]

Andrew's line is just as fantastic on the third read-through as the first. :) And the rest is adorable as well. Your muses actually make it to the bed! Mine are going to have to try that sometime. ;)

[mrs_norrington]

Thanks! :) My muses are just lazy cuddlers at the moment. I'd swear they're in the honeymoon phase with the way they're acting!

[classics_lover]

AndrewMuse: I can haz James now? Kthanx. :-D

JamesMuse: Speak properly, Lieutenant! :-|

AndrewMuse: Time for bed, lover, >:-D

JamesMuse: I can haz luvmakin an cuddlzez? *squee*

[mrs_norrington]

lol! My James has a fondness for cat macros that's for sure. ;)

[classics_lover]

Torn between Awwwww! and Hawt!

This is just lovely. It's great to see you writing again - and I think you've lost none of your style and panache for your recent block.

James reverting to Commodorial tones to waken sleepy!Stubborn!Andrew is LOL fantastic, and Andrew's rejoinder is priceless. I'm as intrigued by Andrew's imagination as James is, after that.

Lovely, just lovely!

[mrs_norrington]

Out of all of it, Andrew's voice saying that was the strongest thing. I don't think I changed it once from the first time I typed it. ;)

Thanks! I figure if I just give in and write them cuddling enough, the muses will get up and do something. *g*