FIC; The Universe Encompasses and Swallows Me Up Like an Atom

[mozarts_piano]

title: the universe encompasses and swallows me up like an atom
author: mozarts-piano
pairings: louis/harry (mentions of liam/zayn, niall/ofc, matt cardle/aiden grimshaw)
word count: 5,000
rating: Mature
warnings: swearing, sexual activities (not too graphic), a very low knowledge of space and planets
summary: harry and louis go on an intergalactic road trip

Comments

[gutterqueen]

That was just the sweetest thing ever. With every new person they met, I was clapping my hands in delight! And aw, their concept of wars... I just want to hug them! Thanks for the unique fic! :)

[mozarts_piano]

Aw thank you for the lovely words! :D I'm so glad you liked!!

[mozarts_piano]

Oh wow, no thank you for the kind words, honestly :D

[exposedwords]

This is so beautiful, I am in awe. I confess that when I saw the summary and that it was kind of a The Little Prince crossover, I was kind of sceptical, but I'm so glad I read it because you did such an utterly amazing job. It's just so sweet (bittersweet sometimes) and beautiful. Uhg their relationship.

[mozarts_piano]

I'm glad you liked it despite skepticism! :D thank you so much - aww, making me all blushy, you are.

[its_a_deal]

This is so lovely! The Little Prince is one of my favorite books, and you captured the charm of that universe amazingly well. It has that elusive naive wisdom about it (can't think of how else to put it, hopefully you know what I mean), and so does this. Absolutely brilliantly written. Especially loved how Harry and Louis compared the "wars" at home over football with Niall's star was (haha puns) it was so adorable. I also love thinking about all of them having this happy life in the stars while we're all here on Earth oblivious, it's so nice. Ugh just so much love in my heart for this fic.

[mozarts_piano]

thank you so much for such a lovely comment :D I think I do know what you mean with the elusive naive wisdom (and am over the moon that you think I captured it in any way) - i think children's books are some of the smartest you'll ever read, because they teach you how to live your life at such a young age.
also antoine is my home boy, so, you know :D
thank you again!!

[doompie]

"they hold each other tightly while they sleep and louis sings harry's favourite song (you are my sunshine, my only sunshine all whispered in his ear)"

- Sneaky! Is this because they DO live in a world where they belong (and it is very nice)?

Loved it!! :D

[mozarts_piano]

yes, the world in which they live is lovely and they belong there forever :D

thank you!! (loooove the icon)