FIC; The Universe Encompasses and Swallows Me Up Like an Atom

Jul 09, 2012 19:01

title: the universe encompasses and swallows me up like an atom
author: mozarts-piano
pairings: louis/harry (mentions of liam/zayn, niall/ofc, matt cardle/aiden grimshaw)
word count: 5,000
rating: Mature
warnings: swearing, sexual activities (not too graphic), a very low knowledge of space and planets
summary: harry and louis go on an intergalactic road trip ( Read more... )

louis/harry, fic

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wildefiree July 10 2012, 07:56:52 UTC
this was SOOOOO LOVELY!!! i love le petit prince and i love the idea that harry and louis are in love and in space witnessing all these beautiful, foreign planets/astronomical phenomenons and the whole raining diamonds phrase at the end was BEAUTIFUL!!!

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:02:18 UTC
thank you so much! the prompt was really lovely and sososo much fun to write :)

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poor_medea July 10 2012, 09:11:05 UTC
Oh, this was lovely. I adore stories where they're just so completely in love and happy.

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:03:26 UTC
oh, me too! especially with everything that's been going on, i'm glad you liked it, dear! thanks!!

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tracedust July 10 2012, 09:32:48 UTC
this is overwhelmingly stunning. seriously just. beautiful.

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:04:22 UTC
oh wow - i am overwhelmed by this comment - that's so nice, thank you :)

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miskowzen July 10 2012, 10:35:31 UTC
this is so perfect i can't even close my mouth and holy tears, how did you even manage this? I AM SO SO PROUD TO CALL YOU MY WIFE. seriously, perfection in every word. it was so beautifully written, all the little descriptions and anecdotes and everything. just. perfect. :')

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:05:18 UTC
thank you so much, aw, you see this is why I think you're a sweetheart :) :) :)
awwwww, stop it you, you're making me blush!

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miskowzen July 11 2012, 10:15:34 UTC
I AM NOT EVEN KIDDING i would have liveblogged it but i was having too many feels and like i couldn't even look away from the page if i tried. SEE I EVEN RECCED IT HERE

http://iliveblogfanfictiondeal.tumblr.com/recs

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say_thanks July 10 2012, 11:40:23 UTC
this is the most adorable thing in the whole entire universe. i absolutely love all the words you've used; it's such a brilliant thing, fiction. we can write what we like and i'm so in awe of all the beautiful imagery and my heart oh god, when they come to earth why do we suck so much :( :( :(

they're so innocent and lovely.

the pouring diamonds
so precious! you are so precious for coming up with all these wonderful different worlds, these different concepts. it was soft and airy and oh my god the bit when they get called fairies and louis thinks about a fairy he'd met.. so gorgeous and sad wow :(

honestly, simply wonderful.

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mozarts_piano July 10 2012, 12:12:15 UTC
oh wow, okay, um, thankyousomuchyouwonderfulperson

haha, aw, thank you! yeah, the earthlings aren't the best, but i tried to make the person who asked if they were from england (and not to toot my own horn, but when louis' like "where even is england?! i laughed. like everytime. at my own joke.) not too horrible, so you know :)

they're very innocent and that's why i adore them so much, aww, thank you :) and yes, louis and his fairy :)

thank you again and again and again you marvelous person!

for this you get maiden icon!!

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