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[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 20/24

Jun 18, 2011 12:48

Title: The Kid
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Canada, Romano, and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada, Germany.) Also, Canada and Prussia are now sort of an item.
Rating: PG-13 (just to be safe)
Warnings: Allusions to serious, ( Read more... )

c: germany, c: oc, c: canada, chapterfic: the kid, c: prussia, fandom: hetalia

Comments 16

onlyforhetalia June 19 2011, 01:34:12 UTC

This story is getting cuter and sadder. D:
I wonder what Freddie will choose for a last name, to bad it can't be awesome.
I can't wait for future chapters either...
Bonus Chapters por favor!

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:30:58 UTC

Thank you for commenting! I hope that the last name didn't turn out to be too boring or anything.

I'm sorry that I ended up not being able to do bonus chapters! I'm still thinking about ideas, because I really want to write those chapters, but I'm just too busy... *sigh*

Anyway, the final chapter is up! I hope you enjoy it!

sweden_chan June 20 2011, 12:57:44 UTC

Ah, how cute! And sad. And Awesome! And akjgljgkl. I wanna read more ;w; If you write bonus chapters I will love you even more. Forever!

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:38:00 UTC

Thank you for your comment! I'm sorry that the bonus chapters didn't really work out... I really did want to write them. I just underestimated my overall workload, so... Well, c'est la vie.

If I get the time, someday, I might want to write them, but it'd depend on what readers wanted to see. And I can't make any promises because I'm just so busy...

moonscales June 20 2011, 23:29:29 UTC

I just stumbled upon this story and I have say, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. It's just so adorable and squee worthy but at the same time everything feels sad and bittersweet and just ajfdklhs. .__.

Also, these bonus chapters that were mentioned sound very interesting! I'd like to see them be written~ :D

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:40:03 UTC

Thank you for commenting! Now that the final chapter has been posted, I really hope that everyone is satisfied with the conclusion...

And I'd love to do bonus chapters, but I'm super busy. :( I underestimated my work load. I feel really bad about getting people's hopes up...

It's really sad to not be able to write them, because I want to write them, and I have tons of ideas. If only I had the time...

emmones June 21 2011, 10:16:28 UTC

aw, poor Germany ; __ ; but Prussia and Canada are just too sweet together. Can't wait 'til the next chapter!

Bonus stories would be amazing :D

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:41:59 UTC

Thank you for commenting! The last chapter is up, and I can't offer bonus chapters right now (even though I want to write them someday, I'm just not sure when or even if I'll get a chance...). But I really hope that you enjoy the story as it is! I did my best given my time constraints.

And I'm glad that you like the Prussia/Canada. They're one of my favorite couples...

kuriixcurry June 25 2011, 13:17:12 UTC

Oh, sorry, I didn't see that earlier ... ! D:
(I was revising for exams ... *dies*)

Another cuute chapter, I liked it. ♥
The part with Germany was really sad (the mention of Hitler was a bit heartbreaking for me, I don't know why orz) ... But then, Freddy enlighted it with his cuteness, and I want him to choose Awesome as a last name. 8D
And the end with Canada was soo sweet, the story about their first meet is really lovely. x3

Again, great job ! :3

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:44:42 UTC

Thank you for commenting!

No worries at all! I'm sorry that I never got around to replying to everyone... Especially when you have such long, lovely comments. I read the comments as everyone posted them, and they just made my day every time. I genuinely and greatly appreciate all of the time you took to respond to me. It means just so much to me.

The Hitler part was a bit of headcanon that I've had for ages and ages, and it makes me sad to think about, so I don't think it's odd or anything to find it heartbreaking.

I hope that you don't mind the last name that they came up with in the end!

Thank you again!

kuriixcurry July 15 2011, 22:47:22 UTC

Oh, no, it's okay ! :'D
I always tend to write looong comments, because when it's too short, I have the feeling that I missed something (and I always reread it too, to make sure I didn't forgot anything) ... |D

Your headcanon is just that great, duh. Do you mind if I steal it ? ;w;

Hehe, yep ! I saw it ~ I'm okay with that too. *-*

You're welcome. :'3

moyakite July 31 2011, 00:48:50 UTC

I love long comments, really, and I certainly appreciate the time and effort that it takes to write them. Thank you!

Oh, sure! There was an awful lot of my headcanon wrapped up in this fic; take all that you want of it!