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[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 20/24

Jun 18, 2011 12:48

Title: The Kid
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Mainly Prussia, Canada, Romano, and Freddy (little kid!OC), but almost everyone could end up in here eventually. (In this chapter: Freddy, Prussia, Canada, Germany.) Also, Canada and Prussia are now sort of an item.
Rating: PG-13 (just to be safe)
Warnings: Allusions to serious, ( Read more... )

c: germany, c: oc, c: canada, chapterfic: the kid, c: prussia, fandom: hetalia

Comments 16

chichi_1234 June 30 2011, 21:01:04 UTC

This is just so sweet. Freddy is so cute and Prussia really does make an awesome dad. I kept giggling like crazy at certain parts.

moyakite July 15 2011, 21:45:57 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm really glad that you liked it. The last chapter is up, and I admit that I'm nervous about what everyone will think... I hope everyone enjoys it!

And I sincerely appreciate that you took the time to comment. Seeing people comment makes my day.

sobdasha August 14 2011, 00:42:43 UTC

Things are getting more serious and heartbreaky, but the chapters aren't losing any of the great charm.

The way you've developed Prussia and Canada's relationship is just so much <3 It's been kind of an unspoken thread all along, and now seeing it come to the crisis--bittersweet and sad fluff are my weakness. And so many good lines--Canada calling Prussia out on breaking down into self-pity and "half-baked selflessness," and Canada giving him a look to rival France and the "Attracted?" line, and "It's my heart. I can break it if I want to," and the playful banter in the bedroom as Canada tries to get Prussia to admit to himself it's not just pity-kindness, and recounting how they met, etc. etc... I think what really appeals to me too (besides how great that all was) is that you put a lot of focus on writing those parts and showing how they interact and making me fall in love with the pair, more than just the actual "I love you" moment. To me that kind of stuff always feels way more romantic than The Three Words, so I really enjoyed ( ... )

moyakite September 3 2011, 04:30:34 UTC

Oh, before I get to anything else... I sort of made an FST for Prussia/Canada as shipped in this fic, and I don't know what to do with it--I don't want to do anything illegal, but people don't like youtube playlist FSTs... Hmmm... Any thoughts ( ... )