Wow, again an awesome chapter! I really liked how this chapter showed a bit more of Jared's continuing effects from his attack, that was really interesting to see. But I think it also showed that he is a bit of a resilient guy because he certainly didn't seem like he was going to let it stop him and I have to admit that I kind of admire his bravery right now. It's obvious he's terrified but he's trying and I'm so glad that he has good friends like Alona and Chad and of course, Jensen. I'm also intrigued to find out more about their history, especially since it sounds like they met after Jared was attacked. Jensen was superb in this chapter, I love him when he's all protective and such and boy do you have that covered! I think it'll be really fascinating to see how working this case together affects their relationship
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*blushes* Thank you so much once again! To answer some of your questions, yes they met after the attack. They met through Alona, as I will eventually say in the story. And also, it was a little hard to tell b/c I wasn't sure how else to do it, but I didn't mean that Jared revealed he's Lehne's victim. He just revealed that he's been attacked in the past. So far only Alona, Chad, his family, Misha, and Jim know who hurt him.
You're welcome though it's my pleasure, this is truly a great read! Oh, I can't wait to see their history! Okay, that's understandable and yeah, that makes sense now. It'll be very interesting to see how Jensen reacts to finding out... something tells me he's going to be pissed and this is going to make him even more obsessed with catching Lehne. I can also just picture the horror he's gonna feel at knowing exactly how Lehne tortures his victims and then picturing someone he loves at the hands of that monster. Thanks for clearing that up! Looking forward to more :D
Aww...thank you again! I'm always self conscious about my own work, so I really appreciate it! And there will be lots of flashbacks throughout the fic that will show their earlier relationship and all. And I will definitely address Jensen's reaction to Jared's history with Lehne as well :)
And can't wait! I've been enjoying that story of yours for awhile lol.
Poor Jared I think in a way this will be good for him he can try aand put some closure on what has happened by helping the police to catch the Senator. I am loving the story so far and Jensen you speak up for your man.
Awesome update, you are spoiling me :). It was great, I loved how you are giving us all the pieces to the story like part of Jarred past and the senators profiling, which was done great. And as always you leave us hanging, man I am on edged I can't believe Jared just blared it out. What's gonna happen now? Does the senator know that Jared is alive? Does he know who Jared is ? Okay am going to try so hard not to nag for an update in less then 24 hours, but I make no promises :p ...lol..... More Please.
Hehe. Thank you dear *hugs*. I'm glad the profiling part was well done...I was worried. I know psych well (it's my major) but wasn't sure it would be believable. And to answer your questions...Yes, he knows he has one of his victims that escaped. But he doesn't know for sure what ever happened to the guy. I will show that at some point as well :). And Jensen doesn't know the senator hurt Jared at all. He thinks Jared didn't know his attacker.
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Again, thank you!!!! *hugs tight*
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P.S. I will try to update my own story ASAP :)
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And can't wait! I've been enjoying that story of yours for awhile lol.
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Tks for the update, and waiting anxiouly for the next one
Take care,
Cla ; }
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Thanks again!
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