Comments | mountainmadman: [ONESHOT] Once Upon a Time

mountainmadman

[ONESHOT] Once Upon a Time

Mar 21, 2011 17:53

Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, on the top of a grassy knoll surrounded by a moat, there lived a princess in a castle.

Dear reader, please don’t make the mistake of assuming that this princess was locked away in the castle. No, no, no.

She was there because she wanted to be. Because she loved that castle with all of her heart. She ( Read more... )

oneshot, rating: g

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anonymous March 22 2011, 02:32:12 UTC

Wow... I actually teared up. That was strangely beautiful.

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:04:11 UTC

*hands tissue* I'm glad I could touch your heart. Thank you for reading.

babypillow March 22 2011, 02:55:55 UTC

all i can say is WOW WOW WOW..... beautifully written ... thanks.

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:03:49 UTC

Thanks for reading!

ysforever March 22 2011, 03:03:48 UTC

What an unusual fairy tale. :)
And it does scream YongSeo even though the names were not mentioned...I don't even have to see the pairing to know it's about them.
Thanks for writing this beautifully...
I hope they will live happily ever after!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:03:37 UTC

I felt that leaving out the names would allow it to be more accessible - beyond the YongSeo fandom. Thank you for your comment.

silverbaby12345 March 22 2011, 04:43:38 UTC

What a unique perspective you tell this fairytale from!
That's the beauty of Yongseo - how we are always left wondering about everything - we can never know the full truth ;)
I love love LOVE this, thank you so much M3. You managed to end it beautifully without the typical "happily ever after" approach!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:03:03 UTC

Perhaps, someday, the truth will come out...and what a happy day that would be! Thanks for reading.

woomyyoungheart March 22 2011, 05:08:07 UTC

I am fascinated. I was hooked from the beginning and till the end. That was delightful and I'm glad that this wasn't too cliche. I like that dialogue isn't use in here because it really isn't needed with the way you wrote this. I love the connection of reality with this... questioning the ending, if there is one.
Absolutely fantastic! Glad I decided to read this! Beyond amazing!
I can't stop showering you and this story with compliments!
I really like how you described the prince "Unlike most other princes in fairy tales that you read, this prince was not overly handsome, nor was he adept in any sort of physical activity, nor did he possess any charms that could sweep any girl off her feet." I love it. Especially since this has a big twist on fluffy fairytales. Fantastic!
I'll stop here... Anyways, I'm definitely looking out for more!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:01:43 UTC

Thank you for your comment! Just something I noticed, you must be a Wooyoung fan? LOL. I'm in love with the WooU couple. <3

woomyyoungheart March 23 2011, 18:19:48 UTC

LOL! Yes, yes I am! :) Ever since Hot Blood!
Hahahaha WooU couple FTW! They are so adorable together! :D
Dream High 2 should get the orig cast!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 18:30:03 UTC

Agree with WooU being adorable, disagree with original cast! >=( Suzy wasn't really cut out for a lead role (even after she improved), I kept thinking how much better the drama would've been if the role had been in the hands of a capable actress. :( And Taecyeon...I'm sorry, but he only has one facial expression.

But Kim Soo Hyun is amazing. Bring HIM back. :D

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