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mountainmadman

[ONESHOT] Once Upon a Time

Mar 21, 2011 17:53

Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, on the top of a grassy knoll surrounded by a moat, there lived a princess in a castle.

Dear reader, please don’t make the mistake of assuming that this princess was locked away in the castle. No, no, no.

She was there because she wanted to be. Because she loved that castle with all of her heart. She ( Read more... )

oneshot, rating: g

Comments 41

zealous2002 March 22 2011, 00:15:52 UTC

This is the best fairy tale ever.
we don't always need a happily ever after ending.
This is so sweet.
i love how the prince is always know what the princess thinking.
If you are in love, you don't always need to speak your mind.
Your other half would know it, weather you want them to know or not.
That's what love is.
So, now everything is about TIME.
Will they meet again?
Will they have their own Happily Ever After?
If TIME & DESTINY will permit they...
Until then...

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:07:23 UTC

I loved your comment. Everything about it is so true. Now all we can do is hope...hope for their eventual reunion. Thanks for reading.

faisazali March 22 2011, 00:20:38 UTC

it's been so long to hear a one-shot from you..
and you're back with a very beautiful analogy..
the end is still blurry but i know the prince has become too fond with the princess and so the princess who just be able to know the world, thanks to the prince..
and because of that, i know someday, somehow..the prince will return or maybe the princess will leave the castle...
but the one i would say i'm sure is that the happy ending will be blessed upon them, if they remain strong and having faith with each other...
thanks m3!!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:06:45 UTC

I don't write one-shots all that much, but recently, I've been getting into them. Something about being able to write what you want to write without any tedious exposition appeals to me. Thanks for reading.

anonymous March 22 2011, 00:30:56 UTC

Beautiful. It's just eh different but beautiful.
Thank you so much for writing this.
Your writings are awesome by the way ^^

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:06:08 UTC

Thanks for the comment. I love writing, I'm glad so many people like it.

melibu7 March 22 2011, 01:04:08 UTC

wow! i love the open ended ending :) beautiful indeed :)

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:05:46 UTC

What about YongSeo ISN'T beautiful? Thanks for reading.

kerubechan March 22 2011, 01:13:07 UTC

I liked this A LOT!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

mountainmadman March 23 2011, 17:04:22 UTC

Thanks for reading!!!