Broken Glass - Part 5/15 - Cuts

[motsureru]

Author: motsureru

Title: Broken Glass: Part Five - Cuts

Rating: PG-13 for serious matter? Will lead up to NC-17 in due time.

Spoilers/Summary: Everything. A continuation after Season 1, Sylar/Mohinder-centric

Notes: Thanks to hugh for beta work~

Word Count: 2,989

Teaser: “We’re not standing so far apart in this world. So use me. I want you to.”

.5 Cuts

Comments

[poemwithnorhyme]

I'm really enjoying this fanfiction. I love their banter, it seems so..them. It was really sad that he gave up on adopting Molly, but since it's for Sylar I can live with it. ^_^ I can't wait for more, I think that's all I really need to say. Great job.

[motsureru]

xD! So quick to sacrifice Molly for the greater Mylar! As much as Mohinder cares about her, I really can't see that with Sylar running loose he'd actually be able to keep her- even if he wanted to. That doesn't mean, however, that giving her up for the chance to tame Sylar wasn't a blow to him.

Glad you're enjoying this and thanks for reading!

[ex_nothingto835]

Love love LOVING this series- you have their dialogue down SO well. It's going to be interesting to see how this arrangement is going to work between the two of them!

[motsureru]

you have their dialogue down SO well

;-; <3 That makes me squee. I try really hard to make the dialogue sound believable. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading!

[holy_cockroach]

Yay!! This is (still) incredibly amazing! Fantastic!!

When was an opportune time to be a compromising position with Sylar?
For you, Mohinder? Always. XD

“Now sit there and pretend you’re a normal amnesiac so I can take care of this and get you the hell out of here before someone realizes what a snake you are!”
XDDDD What can I say. It's so incredibly Mohinder. He would say that.

<33 You win.

[motsureru]

xD! Thank you so much! They'll be in more compromising situations yet... not to mention a flashback here and there. ^_~ Thanks for the compliments and stay tuned! :3

[vanitashaze]

“You know, some psychologists would call this obsession a twisted Electra complex."
*snerk*

I am fast becoming in love with this fic. The dialouge, especially, is just absolutely fantastical. And everything is just so... realistic. Like, I could completely see this happening cannonically (barring certain suspense factors and if NBC ever got a spine when it comes to mmff).

“You’ll have to listen to anything I say.”
“You’ll have to get me anything I need.”

Not particularly sure why, but these two lines just jumped out. Nice rhythm. And--hee. Banter.

[motsureru]

The dialouge, especially, is just absolutely fantastical. And everything is just so... realistic. Like, I could completely see this happening cannonically

;__; *LOVE* Hearing that the dialogue is good makes me melt. It's the one thing I absolutely kill myself over while I'm writing. I'm happy you're enjoy this so much! Thanks!

[forsquilis]

“If you try to steal my work, if you harm anyone, I will kill you.”
“I’ll look forward to it.”
I just loved these lines. Mohinder...you're an idiot sometimes.

I'm getting curious about where this goes--I keep waiting for Sylar to smile a big smile at Mo and then stand up.

[motsureru]

Heehee. Trust me, there are more interesting moments than that in store. ^_^ Thanks for reading!