Broken Glass - Part 5/15 - Cuts

[motsureru]

Author: motsureru

Title: Broken Glass: Part Five - Cuts

Rating: PG-13 for serious matter? Will lead up to NC-17 in due time.

Spoilers/Summary: Everything. A continuation after Season 1, Sylar/Mohinder-centric

Notes: Thanks to hugh for beta work~

Word Count: 2,989

Teaser: “We’re not standing so far apart in this world. So use me. I want you to.”

.5 Cuts

Comments

[flo_nelja]

I must admit that Mohinder disappoints me a little. Sylar's reasonings are always so wrong, and it would be so easy to find good answer, like he did when he reminded Sylar he was not to play a bog part on the evolution game... really, Mohinder can make Sylar angry when he finds the good words, too, and I'd like to see this less inegal.

Still, I'd really like to see how this deal will do !

[motsureru]

Yeah, it's hard to say where Mohinder draws the line at being selfish and being noble, being fooled or going along, and for what causes. The convoluted nature of their relationship is really hard to work out without teetering too far in one direction or the other while taking liberties. X_x

Thanks for reading/commenting!

[ivy_b]

I just love how much fun Sylar is having with all of this and how he's "bleeding out" Mohinder's hate. Great job on that.

" “You really like to hear yourself talk, don’t you?” "- LOL, but we all like to hear Mohinder talk! Such a sexy voice.

" “You know, some psychologists would call this obsession a twisted Electra complex.”"- isn't Electra complex between girls and their dads? Sure Mohinder is pretty enough, but last time I checked he wasn't a girl.

Great job, I'm really loving this series. I feel so bad about the whole thing with Molly, you just know that it's tearing Mohinder's heart.

[motsureru]

isn't Electra complex between girls and their dads? Sure Mohinder is pretty enough, but last time I checked he wasn't a girl.

Yes it is. That's why Sylar's poking fun at Mohinder for having a 'twisted' version of the daddy complex, son to father instead of daughter to father. ^_~

I feel so bad about the whole thing with Molly, you just know that it's tearing Mohinder's heart.

I know. ;_; I'm glad you commented on that- I wondered how sad people would be to read it. This is part of the reason why Mohinder's so irritable in this chapter and the next- he's sacrificing a lot of personal things he knows he has to in order to 1) continue his work, and 2) keep others safe. Even if it means giving up his only chance at some semblance of a normal life. ;_;

Thanks for reading! I'm happy you're enjoying it. ^_^

[motsureru]

it appears you've said it all. xD <333!

[nurse_stiney]

Their conversations are so spot-on, I could hear their sexy voices saying the worlds SO clearly.
I'm absolutely in love with this series so far, but I must say that I like this chapter the most for two reasons:
1.) Giving nurses props. ;) As a nursing student, that makes me so uber-happy.
2.) Not pulling Molly into the Mylar mess. As much as I've enjoyed reading the Mywalker stories, it would just be completely unrealistic to introduce Molly to Sylar in your universe. So, yeah, I loved the ending to this one. So sad, but so perfect.
Am SO looking forward to more!!!

[motsureru]

hee! You're not the first to mention the nurse thing. ^_~ I was in the hospital for a week last year and MAN did I get a new appreciation for nurses. They are intimidatingly awesome. @_@

And yeah, I didn't think Molly would be a very realistic factor in the mylar relationship. Glad other people thought so too!

Thanks so much for reading!

[aunt_zelda]

This keeps getting better and better and better ... KENSAI APPROVAL!!!

“Now boys, THAT is not allowed in the hospital.” -came a reproachful tone.
*DIES of GIGGLESPAZ*

“If you try to steal my work, if you harm anyone, I will kill you.”
“I’ll look forward to it.”
Hmmm ... that's eerie ... (I like it)

We’re not standing so far apart in this world. So use me. I want you to.
Ohhhh ... that was PRICELESS. And shiny. And perfectly lovely.

[motsureru]

^_^ thanks so much! Hopefully I'll put up the next part before I disappear for three or four days. :3 Would hate to keep people waiting!

[aunt_zelda]

I did that a few days ago, posted 'A Parody Of Love: Part 3' on peterandclaude, even though it was too short and not so good. I came back yesterday, and people liked the fic! It's odd ...