[one-shot] Shift & Accelerate

[kailice]

Title: Shift & Accelerate
Pairing: Aiba/Jun
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,109
Summary: AU. Too stable to doubt; too doubtful to trust.
Author's Note: Won first place in the fanfic contest at junbaday! Thanks to everyone who voted for me! And, of course, thanks to everyone who's been waiting for me to make a comeback. I'm sorry to have kept you all hanging,

Comments

[kyazne]

*Tears on the verge of falling* I truly have no words for this fic. This was so amazing! The way you write speaks wonders. I loved the way you described the most complex of feelings so simply and still managed to evoke those very same emotions out of me. Thank you so so much for sharing!

[kailice]

*hands over a box of tissues for the tears* I can't even begin how wonderful it is to read comments like this. Thank you <3

[calerine]

This is some amazing amazing comeback.

I love how the driving references throughout the story helps to pack the plot tightly together. I love how Happy's death is a sort of foreboding for Ohno's health worsening, but not really because everything got better in the end. I love Ohno's reply to Aiba's "I want to feel the world’s heart beating.". I love how it is so like him to suddenly think of that while watching fireworks. I love your imagery as usual, and all your parenthesis are so fitting and doesn't disrupt the flow, but instead contributes to the mood. I love the juxtaposition when you put Tokyo and their cottage side by side, how they are worlds apart but just just situated so near to each other. And that's how I imagine Jun and Aiba to be at the start when Jun first arrives. I also love how you characterised all 5 of them. How Ohno and Nino and Sho are all looking out for Aiba without being obvious, and Aiba's looking out for all 3 of them too - how he notices when Jun takes pictures of them. I love how the story flows with

[kailice]

Um... can I just sum it up and say I LOVE YOU. I was smiling like an idiot reading all of that, and all of the things you noticed that I didn't think anyone would, and all I can think of to say in reply is that you made my night. I love you like crazy <3

♥♥♥

[crux_australis]

Thank you for reminding me of what I loved about this pairing two, three, four years ago. :) This was beautiful.

[kailice]

Always happy to share the Junba love ;D Thanks for reading!

[pnutbutterkelly]

...NYEHHHH. ;_;♥
(Translation: That was so beautiful. Thank you so much for being amazing and writing amazing things.)

[kailice]

♥ :D

[honeypuffed]

oh man this is just so gorgeous, i don't even have words to describe how much i adore the style and the characterisation and just everything ♥

[kailice]

I love your writing. Shouldn't I be the one praising you? XD

♥

[honeypuffed]

ack what no way, not when you write like this ;~; ♥♥

[kailice]

Okay, I have a compromise: we shower each other with praise. Both of our egos will be highly satisfied ♥