Black Magic White Lies, chapter 6

Jul 06, 2009 12:53

Title: Black Magic White Lies
Chapter 6 - In Which Willow Proves That Lies By Omission Are The Most Effective Ones
Timeline: BtVS, alternate season 5
Genre: drama, mystery, action
Characters, pairing: general, Xander/Faith
Rating: R (for intense situations).
Summary: Xander thinks he has a little secret. He doesn't know that his little secret is ( Read more... )

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parcae_lj July 6 2009, 09:13:04 UTC
"The Fellowship of Differently Animated Plasmavores"

Genius.

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 09:30:26 UTC
Thank you!

Actually, "plasmavore" a Dr.Who term. elisi used it in her current fic My Immortal, and I nicked her idea.

I'm glad it works! I was a bit unsure about using the term.

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 11:51:44 UTC
In Xander's defence, I can say that the events happen very quickly, and he is full of anxiety and guilt - for not beiong there for Faith, for hiding the truth from Buffy and Giles, for dragging Willow in his problems. He is terrified of facing Anya because of her brutal honesty.

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keith5by5 July 6 2009, 10:39:15 UTC
Faith's making a mess of the Black Thorns, great stuff.

Like the prophecy too, adds backstory.

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 11:58:26 UTC
Oh, I think Faith would have been an awesome addition to AtS season 5. *misses Faith terribly*

Like the prophecy too, adds backstory.

Thank you! I think that the canonical mythology of season 5 is fascinating, yet a bit underdeveloped. A great excuse to twist it the way the story demands.

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keith5by5 July 6 2009, 12:01:33 UTC
"Oh, I think Faith would have been an awesome addition to AtS season 5. *misses Faith terribly*"

She'd have made a lot more sense than certain additions did that's for sure.

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 12:19:19 UTC
I think TheWB would have gladly added Faith to AtS cast in any season, if Eliza would have expressed interest. Apparently, Tru Calling looked a better option back then. Pity.

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tvnerdgirl July 6 2009, 11:30:54 UTC
Wow, I love the way you had Willow totally get Xander off the hook! Nice job :)

And the plot is certainly thickening! Can't wait to read more :)

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 12:01:48 UTC
Wow, I love the way you had Willow totally get Xander off the hook! Nice job :)

Thank you! BtVS always fascinated me with its seamless mix of magic and technology, and I wanted to recreate the combo. Hence, Internet Explorer options and ancient scrolls in the same package. :)

And the plot is certainly thickening! Can't wait to read more :)

Soon... :)

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sarian71 July 6 2009, 13:22:28 UTC
Willow is very good at lying. I haven't decided yet whether that is a good or a bad thing... :)

And the plot thickens! I liked very much how you brought The Circle of the Black Thorn and Faith's former watcher into this.

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moscow_watcher July 6 2009, 14:02:03 UTC
Willow is very good at lying.

After all, she's a psychologist's daughter. :)

I liked very much how you brought The Circle of the Black Thorn and Faith's former watcher into this.

Thank you! I wasn't sure if I overcomplicated the plot. I'm glad I can keep your interest!

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