Your writing's bad and you should feel bad: Kate Alexander

[morwen_peredhil]

So, Kate Alexander, you just had to let readers know that the heroine of your WWII novel Friends and Enemies (1982) is pretty by having her older brother think on page 3 that if she weren't his sister, he'd find her superhot, and then having him go on to list her charms in his mind, which include "all the right curves." This makes the brother feel

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[apeygirl]

First Save the Pearls and now this apparent prize. Why are you doing this to your brain? ;)

[morwen_peredhil]

I'm on page 55 now, and thankfully there has been no more weird incestuous subtext.