FIC: Broken Vessel Part 6

Aug 12, 2009 14:50



Title: Broken Vessel Part 6

Author: Toggledog

Rating: FRAO

Pairing: Morgan/Reid, Reid/OMC

Warnings: rape recovery, angst

Summary: Morgan and Reid attend a wedding where both overdo it on the alcohol for the same reason, but have differing consequences. My fic for the wedding challenge.

Author’s Notes: Thanks to all who r&r’d, so far. Sorry for the delay ( Read more... )

author: toggledog, fanfic, rating: nc17

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momma_66 August 12 2009, 05:06:39 UTC
This has been by far the most fantastic chapter. I'll admit I had to skim through some of the fight, tears and stuff y'know, but really amazing. And seriously take your time if you want these are worth waiting for.

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toggledog August 13 2009, 08:48:20 UTC
Thanks! I've been happy with how this has turned out. The other chapters I was frustrated with but it's starting to...become something

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berryblue_girl August 12 2009, 06:58:05 UTC
OMG THAT WAS SO SUPER DUBER INTENSE! Dude, keep it up! This fic is shaping up to be your best yet! Props! The fight scene was really real and emotional! Fantastic! Sarah

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toggledog August 13 2009, 08:49:30 UTC
Thanks so much! This is my main kind of writing-the angstier the better.

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finnishsphinx August 12 2009, 09:34:57 UTC
Little venting is always good.
The ending was totally sweet.

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toggledog August 13 2009, 08:49:54 UTC
Mmm... good to get it out. Thanks :)

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brittdavis21 August 12 2009, 17:10:59 UTC
Intense chapter with a sweet ending.

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toggledog August 13 2009, 08:50:43 UTC
Aw thanks. I couldn't bare to write any more angst! :)

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"BROKEN . . ." karyng August 12 2009, 17:27:55 UTC
Countless accolades to your anguish muses ( ... )

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Re: "BROKEN . . ." idonmatrix August 13 2009, 01:53:10 UTC
Great, great chapter very romantic. I loved it :) and can't wait for the next installment.

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Re: "BROKEN . . ." toggledog August 13 2009, 08:51:08 UTC
Thanks! Should have one up soon

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Re: "BROKEN . . ." toggledog August 13 2009, 08:56:33 UTC
Wow! Thanks so much. Where's the quote from? It's very beautiful. Thanks also-you're giving me ideas ie; "Fear of having inherited her disposition
maybe fueling Reid’s ‘denial’" That didn't occur to me and makes complete sense! I'll def try and include it in the next chapter.

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