[fic] Bloody Hormones

[morbid_musings]

Bloody Hormones

Summary: Falling in love is never easy business. For Harry it’s a dozen times worse. He’s fallen in love with someone he thought he hated. HPDM.

Spoilers: None, really. Maybe some minor hints. Still, it’s pretty much AU after “Harry Potter and the Order of Phoenix”.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter.

Notes: I hate myself. This was

Comments

[le_bizarre]

Wow! A wonderful story! <3 I love it and I suealed a lot! XD

[morbid_musings]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[morbid_musings]

Thanks. Glad you liked.

[aletes_muse]

I love this story; it's very sweet and well written. A few things in it made me laugh - thank you for posting this!

[morbid_musings]

I glad you thought this was sweet and well written. Thanks.

[thrnbrooke]

Wonderful! Looks like Draco was the brave one!

[morbid_musings]

Thanks for the feedback.

[leandralocke]

Okay, I've been trying to post a comment ALL day. Maybe it's to long... hm... *testing*

[leandralocke]

ah, ok, guess it was too long, chopping it to bits then *rolls eyes* stupid LJ.

Okay, since I'm already really enjoying this fic but spotted a few errors, I'm going to point them out...

Harry thought it was only a phase - one of those odd cruses
That should be crushes I guess

Tried to avoid the temptation of cornering the boy in some dark corner and kiss the living shit out of him. No error, but somehow I'd like "snog" better in this context, but that's just me, just an idea :)

[leandralocke]

Well, perhaps he was just a closet pervert.
I'm not really sure about this one (I'm German, so my English isn't perfect *g* ) but shouldn't it be closeted?

But still Harry relented and tried to go on with his life, certain that those dreams were nothing serious - one of those days his attraction would not disappear.
Somehow, the "not" in the last sentense makes no sense, or am I missing something? But I guess you accidentally left it in after changing the sentense or something.

“Fuckin’ hormones,” he whispered angrily one day,
Just an idea, but maybe you should stick to the title of the fic and let him say "Bloody hormones" instead.

[leandralocke]

And just to say something positive again ;) Up until that point the fic is really brilliant. Harry's thoughts about this whole thing are so hilarious and so typical of a teenager. Really well done...
And I hope Harry doesn't tell Ron WHAT exactly is going on, now, because then, I fear, Ron might faint or worse, lol.

ROFL to the part with Hagrid. ^^

So, it’s hardly noteworthy that Harry, through a series of unfortunate circumstances and his own wicked, uncontrollable temper , found himself in detention with Malfoy
Okay, just a wee error, but after temper there's a space before the comma that shouldn't be there ;)