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moonsheen

[FIC] [KH2] This Weather

Jul 09, 2006 19:29

Title: This Weather
Series: Kingdom Hearts 2
Word Count: 3,524
Characters: Riku. Organization XIII.
Summary: The events leading up to Deep Dive...

( Riku's never had a 'moral victory'... )

kingdom hearts, fic

Comments 9

shoiryu July 9 2006, 23:48:49 UTC

Your style is just so deliciously suited to Nobody writing, you know? And as always I adore your Riku beyond measure, eeee.

harukami July 10 2006, 00:07:47 UTC

This is LOVELY. I cracked up hard at the actual organization meeting, and Riku's response to it. And then the fight... I love, love, LOVE the movement in it. It's so... incredibly visual. i could see it all happening and just.

Very much yes.

unedited July 11 2006, 07:53:20 UTC

I am incoherent with love of everything about the prose, about the descriptions, about the characterization, and.

About this fic.

sdfghj;klk

singwithin July 11 2006, 13:49:51 UTC

This was amazing. I mean, completely and absolutely, just.. amazing. It's a really unique take on what happened before Deep Dive, and you totally caught how the Organization fluctuates from being evil to just another group of guys that have to do laundry, same as anyone else. And then Riku's attempt to recognize who Roxas was, and remembering Sora.. And the fight scene, and the carnival that isn't really there..

Also, this is the best part ever:
“-of the Dark,” says Riku to the trapped nobody, who can’t hear him anymore and who flinches back with a slight yelp when it tries to tap on the confines of one of those domes that have always been so useful when someone’s had a big nasty beast to fight. “Darkness of Dark-darkity dark dark everlasting dark. Yeah,” he says this in his own voice, “ You got that part right.”
First off, I cracked up at the part about the domes (because I hate those, I always end up getting thrown up against it somehow), and then Riku being all snarky and just. Man. Quite seriously, you write one of the best ( ... )

jpegasus July 12 2006, 16:55:12 UTC

Nnngh, wow. That was...wow.

And Riku! Fabulous Riku voice

Also, I always mean to add you and your wonderful fic to my watch list, and then I read the fic and am left going o-o for hours afterwards as my head decompresses and I foget.

So THIS time I did it FIRST. *so smrt* Now I am late to work, but eh. Fabulous Nobody fic > work