[FIC] [KH2] This Weather

[moonsheen]

Title: This Weather
Series: Kingdom Hearts 2
Word Count: 3,524
Characters: Riku. Organization XIII.
Summary: The events leading up to Deep Dive...

Comments

[laylah]

I love the way you write Roxas's presence in the Organization, the way he's compelling and disruptive both at the same time, too close to real and breathtaking for it.

All nobodies are subject to Superior, but these elite few are also XIII’s and if they had the being for it they’d love him like a king.

That. just. yes.

[bobrhyn]

I just realized that I never said how much I absolutely loved this. The Organization meeting was totally, brilliantly hilarious, and your Riku voice is just perfect. "Darkness of Dark-darkity dark dark everlasting dark. Yeah," is so much win. Just awesome.

[halfling_rogue]

Yes. Lovely. It particularly reminded me of Kryal's Riku, of which I have been a fan for a long time.

And a very good fight scene, excellent use of setting to help with the action dynamic. Definitely going in the mems. (A few recurrent grammar errors, though. Need a proofreader?)

[shinzuku]

Axel shivered in something vaguely resembling relief.

I like that line and

The Superior inclines his hooded head like he hadn’t been threatening to revoke II’s ‘god given rights’ to a lunch break not a moment ago.

their "bad guy talk" was just awesome.