Working for the Man, Chapter 5

[donnamour1969]

Title: Working for the Man
Fandom : Moonlight
Characters : Mick, Josef
Rating : R, for some sexual content and strong language.
Summary:  Flashback to 1969. Mick takes a job at Kostan Industries before he
becomes a PI. Can Mick and Josef's friendship survive a boss-employee
relationship? A light and fluffy stand-alone fic.
Disclaimer: I don't own these

Comments

[revdorothyl]

I’d made vows, though. For richer, for poorer. In sickness and in health.

You forgot 'until death us do part', Mick -- which by my calculations means your marriage didn't technically outlive your wedding night, when Coraline killed you in order to turn you.

“I like to say that a Penny saved is a Penny earned.”

Well, considering the comparison of Mick's appearance to Jesus, that reference to "a Penny saved" sure seems to put Mick ahead on points.

Fun!

[donnamour1969]

Glad you are enjoying my story. Yeah, I can see your point about "till death...". Mick does tend to lack self-awareness at times. Josef will gain some ground in the next chapter, coming up soon.

Thanks for reviewing.

[ladyailith]

Tee hee! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!

[donnamour1969]

Thanks! Hopefully I won't make you wait for long...

[marykedz]

Cute. I like the hip and more relaxed Mick.

“What the hell is this? The Mod Squad have a yard sale?”

Laughed out loud at that one...unfortunately showing my age, but I had no problem recognizing that reference.

[donnamour1969]

I've been surprised that so many don't need me to explain the sixties to them, lol. It makes it much easier to convey the mood of my story. And saying that I made you laugh is always the greatest compliment someone can give me. Thanks so much! More soon.

LMFAO!!!!

[caffeine2]

LMFAO!!!! The Boys' banter is 100% perfect!

Re: LMFAO!!!!

[donnamour1969]

Why thank you! Saying I made you laugh is always the highest compliment you can give. So glad you are apparently laughing at the right places ;).