because we believe we were meant to be together;

Jan 19, 2011 17:41


colors
yunho/jaejoong, g, romance
559 w.

jaejoong misses it the first time, and catches it the second.

for omichan92 andpikasu ♥

then a flash of red goes by, disappears past his eyes )

genre: romance, rating: g, length: oneshot, pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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spot pikasu January 19 2011, 10:12:03 UTC
omg i want to pee

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Re: spot moonkissedx January 19 2011, 10:29:10 UTC
you stupid potato pls do not be so explicit on my lj kthx /smacks

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Re: spot pikasu January 19 2011, 12:31:37 UTC
YO WHAT UP AS USUAL I HAVE FOUND UN-FUNNY THINGS FUNNY HAHAHAHA. and truly ok this color thing is very interesting pls ah it could become a very nice long verse if you develop it WHICH YOU WON'T, BECAUSE YOU NEED TO FINISH YOUR HOMEWORK. RIGHT. /GLARE.
and pls ah you also need to stop saying your stuff is crap ok pls i like it a lot pls write more after Os i will support you forever you silly marshmallow
(and i also dk how to write gong han omgggg)

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Re: spot moonkissedx January 20 2011, 11:15:34 UTC
lol pls you are potatoes! srsly ah i think i cannot write this any more already, got people say they don't understand sia! i must write more simple things, use primary school english (which i am doing now actually lolol) and YES I NEED TO FINISH MY HOMEWORK. /GLARES BACK.

and pls this is rly crap lor hahaha but ok you like it that is goood it is v good and ofc you ~must~ support me 4eva! pls gonghan is v easy kthx

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moonkissedx January 19 2011, 10:12:42 UTC
for omichan92 ♥ :)

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omichan92 January 19 2011, 13:57:20 UTC
YAY MY SPOT ♥ /grabs on tight.

what can i say bb, you know i absolutely adore your writing /squishes. even though its a drabble, i love the ingenious way you make use of colours and the idea that it was these colours that brought these two together (: love that most of the scenes were spent in the coffee shop/cafe, it gives a very slow-moving, quaint and homely feel to the whole fic which makes it feel so much more personal (;

and personally my favourite part (of course!) was when jaejoong finally grabbed on to that colour that was yunho. and the last line
“hi, i’m kim jaejoong and i think i’m in love with... you.” has to be my absolute favourite line out of the whole fic. so simple, so crazy (to think that you fall in love with someone because of their colour), yet so believable and it just captures the whole essence of the fic. such a lovely little drabble, write more woman!

AND IM STILL WAITING FOR MY JAE/JIJI FIC WITH YUNHO THROWN INTO THE MIX.

/hugs. love you dear ♥

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moonkissedx January 20 2011, 11:40:30 UTC
hehe ♥ ;A; thank you. you're always so nice to me ;;;; /squishes back. you know, i really wasn't thinking when i wrote this. and i thought it was seriously overly simple D: but i'm glad you liked it heh.

alksjd i like that line too heh 8) i'll try to write more :C you know i'm really busy nowadays ;~;

yesss i'll write that jaejae/jiji fic soon hehe.

/hugs you forever! i love you tooo ♥

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yunjaeclimax January 19 2011, 10:26:35 UTC
<3333

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moonkissedx January 20 2011, 11:29:13 UTC
i'm glad you liked it! ♥ and you're following me on twitter, right? i'll follow you back in a while :))

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yunjaeshipper January 19 2011, 10:45:43 UTC
^^
So sweet to notice ur half through the color. <3

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moonkissedx January 20 2011, 11:28:01 UTC
i'm glad you liked it! thank you 8))

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misterricalx January 19 2011, 10:47:56 UTC
this is beautifully written ♥

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moonkissedx January 20 2011, 11:27:41 UTC
thank you so much ♥ :))

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