[Fic] POT. Tachibana/Tezuka. G. Accident

[monitorscreen]

Title: Accident
Author: monitorscreen
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tachibana Kippei/Tezuka Kunimitsu
Rating: G
Word count: 540
Disclaimer: Prince of Tennis is the creation of Konomi Takeshi, not mine.
Summary: Tachibana had never imagined the circumstances of their reunion to be like this.
Warning: Incapacitating injury (not permanent)
Author's notes: Fic

Comments

[darth_claire]

Nice. One crit. It might make your dialogue sound more natural if you used contractions. I'm, don't, doesn't for example. Good job though!

[monitorscreen]

Mm... I've thought about that. Thanks for the crit :-) And for reading and commenting.

[aiwritingfic]

It was very nicely done, and I agree with DC, contractions might help it sound more natural. No one uses zero contractions in real life. ^_^

[monitorscreen]

Thanks :-) And that's true... *ponders if I should go edit all dialogues*

[aiwritingfic]

No point editing everything. Future? ^_^

[monitorscreen]

Sure :-) Though I just realise, I actually don't write a lot of dialogues... Much less than I used to, anyway.