Pride (10/10)

[mokohno]

Title: Pride
Author: Moko
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakumoto, Yama, Matsumiya
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, drama
Disclaimer: They're not mine...
Summary: When Ohno Satoshi got a new job, he knew he would have to face his past again, but what he didn't expect was to be helped by the most unexpected person...

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Comments

[samiilove74]

Thank you for your hard work. I always love your Ohmiya fics.Personally, I prefer seme Ohno, but as long as it's Ohmiya I don't mind Ohno being uke, lol.

[mokohno]

Well, I hope you liked it anyway ^^ Thank you ♥

[mikamichael]

uwaaaaa it's ended with bed scenee,yayy
im not too fond with sho in this series,,he's just a coward, putting blame on ohchan to ease his pain *though it's useless
i hope he could find his hapiness with jun know since ohno already become nino's xD
honestly,,not like ur usual fic,i felt something missing here,some were left unfinished like nino's family problem,,but well im glad ohmiya have their happy *bed* ending
thanks so much for updating everyweekend,,,now im gonna miss ur weekend fic
waitinh for ur next fic♡

[mokohno]

Yeah, Sho's character sucks in this fic xD
I know what you mean by 'something missing', but I admit this fiction got harder and harder to write with each new chapter so in the end I changed a lot of things from my original idea =S
Thank you, as always ♥

[matsuaurore]

FUCKKKK je voulais etre la 1ere à commenter mais comme je bossais T.T

[mokohno]

Oooooooh merci pour ce commentaire ♥

Je fais souvent du Sakumoto en side pairing parce que comme tu sais Aiba et moi en ce moment on est un peu fachés xD Et j'aime beaucoup moins le Sakuraiba qu'avant... Je préfères Jun et Sho... En fait je préfères Ohchan avec Nino, Ohchan avec Sho, Ohchan avec Jun, Ohchan avec Aiba et voilà xD
Le Junba c'est le genre de pairing que je ne peux même pas imaginer de façon plausible, désolée u_u

D'ailleurs j'ai déjà écris une chapitrée Juntoshi en vrai... enfin on devait en écrire une avec ma beta mais elle avait pas le temps au final donc j'ai genre.... 1 chapitre et demi? xD

Merci beaucoup ♥ Actually, I don't know what to say ^^" I'll be working on WD from now! x)

[mkmoonlight]

It's the first time I've seen a story end in the middle of a sex scene. I really think that there should be a sequel to this story or something.
With Ohno's personality in this story, I think that it is WAY better or him to be the uke, so thanks for that. If you made him be the seme, I would probably loose my appetite.
As I love emotional stories, I really wish that you spent more time describing the moment where Nino saw Ohno's scar for the first time.(>.<)
It was nice seeing a more confident/dominant Ohno in this chapter.
I hope that Sho and Nino will soon get to how they were before~ I wish Sho and Jun the best!
Hehe, I love it when Jun starts teasing Nino. Nino is all like "Oh great, now I'm going to be teased for the rest of my life."
This was really a great story, I really enjoyed reading it.

[mokohno]

Haha I never read one that ends like that either, but I was writing and then I stopped and I thought: "What else is there to tell? Nothing." xD
And actually, I love emotional stories as well, especially writing it, it's all sooooooo emotional in my head (and mostly sad) but I always thought that readers would get bored if I wrote to much about feelings and all, so... I made it short >.<

Thank you~ ♥

[baboy_19]

otsukare~! awesome! Sexy hot and cute.. <3
thanks for the fic! ^^

[mokohno]

Than you~ ♥