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Blind (Domlijah) PG-13 (1/?)

Jan 16, 2011 20:52

Title: Blind - 1/?
Author: moit
Pairing: Domlijah
Fandom: Lord of the Rings RPF
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama
Warnings: Slash, violence
Summary: After a horrific accident, Elijah is blinded. Dom is left to pick up the pieces of their broken life.
Word Count: 1701

( Blind )

lotrips: blind, rating: pg-13, pairing: lotrips: domlijah, fandom: lotrips

Comments 20

maiwen05 January 17 2011, 04:20:58 UTC

This is heartbreaking already. :(

moit January 17 2011, 13:11:58 UTC

Awe. I hope not too much? Thanks for reading.

randomdarling January 17 2011, 10:31:43 UTC

I thought this was poignant and heart-breaking, really well-written. It's interesting to see how the reactions differ. Looking forward to the next part. :)

moit January 17 2011, 13:11:26 UTC

Thank you very much -- that's such inspiring feedback. Believe me, we're going to hit rock bottom before things get better.

addie71 January 17 2011, 13:32:43 UTC

Heart breaking sums this up. Poor Elijah, I can't imagine some one doing that to another human being. *shivers*

And poor Dom. He has his work cut out for him.

moit January 17 2011, 20:15:50 UTC

I know, right?! How can I even imagine it?? I'm such an evil cunt..

This is going to be quite the learning experience for everyone involved.

verangel January 17 2011, 17:21:19 UTC

I need to friend your ficlist!! I would have missed this. Its horrible nd I want more.. I can't imagine someone doing this to elijahs gorgeous blue eyes. Its so sad and he has a lot of anger to weigh through, plus the idea that some stranger would want to do that to him. Poor Dom also. He will ned alot of patience. I hope he loves elijah enough to really stick with him. hugs you xooxox v MOREPLEASEMORE quick!

moit January 17 2011, 20:11:50 UTC

Yes you do! That's why I posted these on my regular journie, JUST in case someone wasn't friended. ;)

I can't imagine someone doing this to elijahs gorgeous blue eyes.

Exactly. What's the worst thing someone could do to Elijah? Attack his best feature (other than Dom) of course!

It's going to hit rock bottom before it gets better.

Thanks for reading!

I'll have more as soon as I can!

honeyandvinegar January 17 2011, 19:49:23 UTC

Oh god, girl. Angst much? When does a miracle doctor show up and make everything okay?

*grumps* You horrid bitch. I GUESS i mean that in a good way...

But after everything was cleaned up, Dom retired. He collapsed face-first on the bed in the guesthouse, inhaling the scent of Elijah as tears stung his eyes. Despite his grief, he was asleep in minutes. SHUT UP! Stop making me go :( :( :(!! No wait, don't...

I don't like Dom being such a, as Hannah put it, cunt. Poor Lij needs whatever he can, WHO-ever he can, to get through this. So siddown and shush, Dommeh!!

moit January 17 2011, 20:14:24 UTC

When does a miracle doctor show up and make everything okay?

Never. :P He's perma-blind. NO FIXING IT.

*grumps* You horrid bitch. I GUESS i mean that in a good way...

Twatface. *licks you* This is nothing compared to the things YOU'VE done to our boys.

SHUT UP! Stop making me go :( :( :(!! No wait, don't...

LOL! Nevah!!

I don't like Dom being such a, as Hannah put it, cunt. Poor Lij needs whatever he can, WHO-ever he can, to get through this. So siddown and shush, Dommeh!!

I totally agree. Hannah might have to put the smack-down on Dom. I love her as a character, too.

Just wait until DEBBIE steps in. *nods emphatically*

Thanks for reading luvver! (See, I have moar to trade! ;) )