This is yet another writing exercise. It's a circular poem, which means it should start and end with the same line and that the meaning of the line should somehow change in the interim
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Re: commentsmnemoscatOctober 18 2006, 03:53:28 UTC
My style does tend towards the neo-romantic in general, but in this case I think you have a point. The capitalization of Sycamore was actually accidental. I wrote this at 2am, and wasn't at my most conscious. As for Autumn, I can never remember if you're supposed to cap seasons. I guess probably not, but I do sometimes when I'm not thinking about it. Those two I'll just fix. For the rest, I'll work on conveying it in some other way, although it is (and is meant to be) a romantic sentiment.
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For the rest, I'll work on conveying it in some other way, although it is (and is meant to be) a romantic sentiment.
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