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FIC: Bedside, by Maribou (CSI, Day 11)

May 11, 2006 19:17

Title: Bedside
Author: Maribou
Fandom: CSI
Pairing: Grissom/Sara
Rating: PG
Words: ~500
Summary: Grissom has a headache.

( 'Are you sure you don't want me to take you to the hospital?' Sara asked. )

fandom: csi: las vegas, year: 2006, author: maribou413, day: 11

Comments 20

cincoflex May 12 2006, 00:07:24 UTC

God, what a perfect last line--double meaning, capper to a lovely snippet. Thank you for posting this!

maribouquet May 12 2006, 21:56:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it - and tickled pink to learn that you have an LJ. *runs off to read new Cincoflex fic*

starry_midnight May 12 2006, 00:58:31 UTC

You are so incredibly awesome, just, yes awesome. So is this. Just perfect. Yay!

maribouquet May 12 2006, 21:55:41 UTC

Thanks Miss B!

jessickuh May 12 2006, 03:24:07 UTC

Oh wow, I found that I was getting a headache myself from reading this, because your descriptions were so vivid. Poor, sick, stubborn Grissom. He should've asked her to stay.

maribouquet May 12 2006, 21:55:18 UTC

Mmm, I so agree. :)

ozsaur May 12 2006, 03:34:19 UTC

I kind of got a sympathy headache from your story. That's a compliment, BTW. :-)

maribouquet May 12 2006, 21:54:21 UTC

Hee, thanks!

aliesmyles May 12 2006, 04:48:48 UTC

I loved it especially the last line. It would be nice if you finished the story just an idea. Thanks =)

maribouquet May 12 2006, 21:54:02 UTC

Thanks! I feel like it is finished, but I am curious to hear what you would like to see as an alternate ending.