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mmarinov

Lessons 4/10

Jul 01, 2006 20:47

Sorry for the wait, guys. I don't know why it's taking me so long to write these chapters...true, they are between 5 and 7 thousand words a piece, but I'm on holiday! It shouldn't be taking this long! Stay with me motivation, stay with me...

Title: Lessons 4/10
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Cateory: Gen
Timeline: After 'Provenance' but before ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural, lessons

Comments 57

apieceofcake July 1 2006, 12:03:36 UTC

Oh god!..begs that your motivation stays with you, because this is all kinds of awesome :-)

mmarinov July 1 2006, 12:55:10 UTC

Hee, thank you so much!! =D I think the motivation will remain - I've started chap five and have only been at it for a few hours but I'm already 2000 words into it and going strong! The plot's really starting to roll so now it's a lot more fun to write. Question (if you don't mind) what did you think of the college interactions (like with Joey and Chris) did it detract from the plot and provide some entertainment? I'm very unsure about that...

apieceofcake July 1 2006, 13:36:27 UTC

Personally, I didn't feel that it took anything away from the plot.
It made the whole going to the lecture and college experience more real. I liked it and it added to my enjoyment :-)

pheebs1 July 1 2006, 13:07:09 UTC

Ah I really liked this bit - I loved Dean offering advice to the lovelorn! He should set up his own school. Dean Winchester's Advice for the Loveless. Heh. I see from your comment that you were unsure about it but I don't think it distracted from the main plot too much. Too much more of it and it might have made the pace lag but I was enjoying all I got of it, and felt like it was all useful - it was nice to have an intro to the guys, and then have Sam/Dean ask them for info. Rather than the info just coming from some random people, it felt woven in. That's my two pence anyway.

mmarinov July 2 2006, 03:45:21 UTC

Phew! Thank you so much for the assurance, lol. One of my personal rules is to avoid OCs unless they're bad, so it's always a risk breaking rules, but the success of Warehouse guys in Paper Jam has made me slightly less cautious.

He should set up his own school. Dean Winchester's Advice for the Loveless.

Lol! Every comment from you is a potential new challenge =D

pheebs1 July 2 2006, 12:00:18 UTC

Having trouble commenting so if this posts a million times, just delete them!

HEH! - I am danger to myself and others with my comments, hee.

kiraboshi July 1 2006, 14:27:36 UTC

MORE!

Your dialogue's spot on, girl. Very nice.

mmarinov July 2 2006, 03:49:13 UTC

Hehe, thank you!! *starts diligently working on Chap five*

a_decembrist July 1 2006, 16:52:09 UTC

Yay! Thank goodness Microsoft finally behaved. Now, I guess the question is does Susie actually know something, or does she just think she does?

“Hey, Dean?” Susie said, standing with her hand on the door. She grinned maliciously. “You’re cute, too.” The door slammed shut.

There we go! Excellent chapter, as always. :)

mmarinov July 2 2006, 03:59:07 UTC

Hello, mortal enemy ;)
Yes, Susie def. knows what's going on...I wanted to try my hannd at a human bad guy, see what'd happen. It's really fun to write her!
Thanks for the comment non-Jess-lover.

a_decembrist July 2 2006, 13:48:54 UTC

*grumbleJessmumbleickgrumble* No problem, bad-boy fan. All I ask for is another chapter - fast! :D

wynter_rebel July 1 2006, 18:14:48 UTC

Awesome!!! :-D I want more!

mmarinov July 2 2006, 04:11:40 UTC

I'm 2000 words into chap five but I'm afraid it's going to be another 5-7 thousand word installment, lol.

wynter_rebel July 2 2006, 05:01:12 UTC

GOOD! I like the long installments!! :-D Makes me happy.