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mmarinov

Lessons 4/10

Jul 01, 2006 20:47

Sorry for the wait, guys. I don't know why it's taking me so long to write these chapters...true, they are between 5 and 7 thousand words a piece, but I'm on holiday! It shouldn't be taking this long! Stay with me motivation, stay with me...

Title: Lessons 4/10
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Cateory: Gen
Timeline: After 'Provenance' but before ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural, lessons

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mmarinov July 2 2006, 04:24:42 UTC

Lol, yeah Dean and protective threats is an awesome combination ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

iamthedirtgirl July 2 2006, 00:40:31 UTC

I love what you did with this. What a great twist to throw at us. I never would have thought astral projection when they couldn't figure out why there was no emf. Brilliant idea and what the heck has happened to Sam? You left it hanging so great. I love that Dean got tired of pretense and the gloves came off. I also liked the way Dean got so fed up with the guys conversation and just told them what to do. Such a Dean thing. I think that you needed to have the conversation with the college students in there because they have to interview the people closest to the situation and it's definitely these students. I think it's funny that Dean took so much time picking the lock to make sure no one would know they'd been there and then the books all fall and they're screwed anyway, hmmm, is that irony ( ... )

mmarinov July 2 2006, 04:52:45 UTC

I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter! I was branching a teensy bit away from my usual brand of storytelling (breaking my personal 'no OCs unless evil' rule) but you guys have all completely reassured me, lol, so I thank you!

And I"m honoured to be your comm's first poster! Hehe! I really think the comm is an awesome idea and one that hasn't really been done yet...it'll grow steadily - I suggest you get it advertised, if you haven't already, on http://community.livejournal.com/spnnewsletter/

*scuttles off to write chap five*

iamthedirtgirl July 2 2006, 06:41:15 UTC

oh very nice idea. will definitely do that. thanks for the idea.

*sits back, grabs cold one, and waits patiently for chapt. five*

mmarinov July 2 2006, 23:40:13 UTC

I also suggest joining supernatural_tv and pimping it out there.

jellicle July 2 2006, 07:57:32 UTC

Damn! What the hell is happening?
This is creeping me out!

mmarinov July 2 2006, 08:03:04 UTC

Muahaha! =D (About the creepy part, not the confusing you bit, lol - more things will be revealed next chapter, promise ;D)

anonymous July 2 2006, 17:34:05 UTC

Brilliant! In all aspects - characterisation, mood, atmosphere, pacing, balance of horror/humour/drama - dude, quit your day job, become a writer for the series!

Funniest bit: uni in Australia is exactly the same as your US college - from the salmon-wearing-blond-tipped-blokey-bloke to the chick with the badges to the bottlenecking queues to get into class to the lecturers with thier personal additions to classes. Luckily our courses only start at 9 :)

Looking forward to more!
- Kate

mmarinov July 2 2006, 23:30:44 UTC

=D Well, I'm a fellow Aussie too, so that might be the reason! Lol. I have learnt so much about US unis in the process of writing this story, but the characters are all pulled from my melbourne school ;)

So glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for commenting!

anonymous July 3 2006, 10:55:50 UTC

Ah, ok, I kind of wondered when you used the term "bloke" - I kind of took it for granted that most SPN fans on LJ are American or Canadian. What uni are you at (if you feel like sharing)? I'm at the ANU, 2nd year Arts :D (to prepare me for a lifetime of servitude to the public service). Melbourne's awesome - I went there for BDO and *shopping* - fell in love with the boutiques, did the touristy thing and visited the old melbourne jail and the migration museum. Ok, enough chatter. Great story - go write some more.

- Kate

mmarinov July 3 2006, 11:33:38 UTC

Lol, crap, bloke is a really Aussie terms, isn't it? I go to Melbourne Uni, I'm third year, but only second year Media and Communications because I transfered from Arts after first year =D What are you majoring in? I was leaning towards cinema or cultural studies, for a lifetime of...god knows what, lol. Never been to Canberra - only melb and QLD within Aus (but all over europe, go figure :P)

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mellaithwen July 2 2006, 18:37:23 UTC

EVIL EMO-GHOST-CHICK-WHO-ISN'T-A-GHOST-AT-ALL

don't suppose you want to finish the story by the tenth? *bats eyelashes*

mmarinov July 2 2006, 23:31:39 UTC

9:30 in the bloody morning...*grumbles*

ANYway, lol, I'll try but I highly doubt it :( You going away??

mellaithwen July 3 2006, 02:03:12 UTC

yah, coming to bug your side of the hemisphere for 6 weeks :)

mmarinov July 3 2006, 02:10:17 UTC

How awesome!! Where you heading to? And you won't have net access :O

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