Title: Cherry Chapter no: 1 Rating: Nc-17 Summary: Autumn Richards was your average, everyday nerd. Then why was Mr. Tall, Dark and Handsome stalking her?
oh... I don't speak for everyone, but I think most people more then like it. XD I love re-reading your story until you post the next chapter... Then I'm on the edge of my seat getting in trouble for having to finish it. haha keep it up~ <3 (nice to meet you, I review under whitknee on AFF.)
>_> I don't know if you want me to point this out or not... (just let me know) in this chapter you write " "Here." Dominick helped her shrug into her bag before pushing her off down the hall, his appearance still dishevelled." where in the next chapter, he has her bag... >_> but~ it's minor and maybe it's supposed to be her thinking she has her bag... or she redropped it or something... *shrug* just thought I'd put that out there.
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Hi, I just read this over on AFF and even left a review on it.
This story is just wonderful in SO many ways. I adore it.
Mind if I friend you here on LJ?
~Alice~
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Im just glad people like it
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>_> I don't know if you want me to point this out or not... (just let me know) in this chapter you write "
"Here." Dominick helped her shrug into her bag before pushing her off down the hall, his appearance still dishevelled." where in the next chapter, he has her bag... >_> but~ it's minor and maybe it's supposed to be her thinking she has her bag... or she redropped it or something... *shrug* just thought I'd put that out there.
^__^ i lurf your story~
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i noticed it after I posted it and i havent gotten arond to changing it.
Once I get all the chapters up on here this will probably be updated first.
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