Comments | mizbean: Bleach: Little Ghost [Ichigo, G]

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Bleach: Little Ghost [Ichigo, G]

Jun 13, 2009 03:00

Title: Little Ghost
Author: mizBean
Rating: G
Word count: 300 exactly
Fandom: Bleach
Character/Pairing: Ichigo
Spoilers: None.
Summary: No one noticed her because she was a ghost.
Notes: Submitted to bleach_contest. Prompt: Someday. 300 word maximum.

( Little Ghost )

bleach, fic, character: kurosaki ichigo, fic: bleach, 100-999 words, genre: gen, community: bleach_contest

Comments 17

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mizbean June 13 2009, 17:05:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the ending worked. It was the hardest part to write.

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mizbean June 13 2009, 18:42:09 UTC

Yes. Yes, they are. Thank you:)

sophiap June 13 2009, 18:48:37 UTC

Wow. That's a sweet little fic that packs a nice punch. I really like your take on young Ichigo.

mizbean June 13 2009, 21:54:30 UTC

Thank you very much!

shmobeline June 14 2009, 00:04:05 UTC

I think your characterisation is spot on. Really well written. :)

mizbean June 14 2009, 02:48:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy to hear Ichigo's characterization worked.

youkai_girl June 14 2009, 00:35:16 UTC

This speaks to Ichigo's general character - he always wants to right wrongs and save everyone. Nice foreshadowing of things to come.

mizbean June 14 2009, 04:07:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear Ichigo's characterization worked.

misumaru June 14 2009, 10:56:11 UTC

Lovely. I really miss this aspect of Ichigo. The whole 'could see ghosts and tried to help them' side of his personality seems to be have been lost with all the endless fighting. :(

mizbean June 14 2009, 13:49:32 UTC

Thank you!

I agree. I'm having battle fatigue myself, although I'm excited we're finally getting to see Stark in action. I miss Ichigo's family and the rest of the Karakura kids, and I'll be so happy when we can leave Hueco Mundo behind.