Bleach: Little Ghost [Ichigo, G]

Jun 13, 2009 03:00

Title: Little Ghost
Author: mizBean
Rating: G
Word count: 300 exactly
Fandom: Bleach
Character/Pairing: Ichigo
Spoilers: None.
Summary: No one noticed her because she was a ghost.
Notes: Submitted to bleach_contest. Prompt: Someday. 300 word maximum.

Little Ghost )

bleach, fic, character: kurosaki ichigo, fic: bleach, 100-999 words, genre: gen, community: bleach_contest

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Comments 17

sharikqah June 14 2009, 14:04:51 UTC
I would say the ending is the crowning glory of this fic. Without the last 4 paragraphs this entire fic would've been a discourse.

I like how you put Ichigo in a dilemma here: uncertain & unsure, but still willing to help.

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mizbean June 15 2009, 13:29:09 UTC
Thank you! I actually had a tough time finishing this story, so I'm glad to hear the ending worked. Thanks for your feedback.

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drabbleandfluff June 14 2009, 20:08:19 UTC
I really liked this! It's great to get back to young Ichigo and remember he always championed the lost ghosts no one else could see. This is like the earliest little peek into his power, and it is so sweet!

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mizbean June 15 2009, 13:30:50 UTC
Thank you! I admit I have a soft spot for stories about the early lives my favorite characters.

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mizbean June 25 2009, 13:43:36 UTC
Thank you!! I miss seeing this side of Ichigo myself.

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cutecoati June 24 2009, 17:43:13 UTC
I FORGOT YOUR BIRTHDAY! *hangs head* *iz worst friend evah*

Belatedly, I wish you all the best, my dear! May there be many happy returns, with love, fun, and pr0n! ♥

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mizbean June 25 2009, 13:42:30 UTC
Thank you!!

Don't feel bad. I kind of forgot my birthday myself!

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