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mizbean

Bleach Fic: One Night in Rukongai [PG]

Mar 28, 2009 00:58

This entry was written for this week's Bleach_Contest challenge: Alcohol (a word I keep thinking has an extra 'h' in it)

Title: One Night in Rukongai
Rating: PG
Pairings/Characters: Flirtations with Ichigo/Renji, Ichigo/Rukia and Renji/Rukia (UST mostly. I originally envisioned this as a threesome. Didn't quite make it in that direction.)
Word Count: 1,435
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1000-5000 words, pairing: ichigoxrenjixrukia, community: bleach_contest, character: kuchiki rukia, fic, bleach, character: kurosaki ichigo, fic: bleach, character: abarai renji

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mizbean March 29 2009, 15:58:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm pretty new to Bleach as well, so I'm happy to hear that the characterizations worked. It's always nerve-wracking writing in a new fandom. And I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed the story:)

sirenspammer March 29 2009, 22:58:56 UTC

; 3 ; This is so adorableeee <3 alsjflaksjf
The way you described drunk!Rukia was so cute :]

mizbean March 30 2009, 03:39:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story:)

jaganshi_kyou March 30 2009, 08:14:06 UTC

<3 I LIKE!!!! It's like four in the morning here so I can't be to eloquent, but I just wanted to say, "Hey! You're awesome... Write more." LOL!

mizbean March 31 2009, 04:21:52 UTC

Thank you:))

tokogawa7 March 30 2009, 17:37:43 UTC

A charming fic with touches of romance and companionship. You show an intuition of the character's motives and how they do things that they seem not to believe in. The night of drinking is a world into its self where everything else seems to drain and become that night's own emotion of cool giddiness, that night's own scent of spewn sweetness.

mizbean March 31 2009, 04:23:11 UTC

What a lovely review. Thank you for that:)

pwe_dragonsbane March 31 2009, 04:51:10 UTC

I like it a lot :D

mizbean March 31 2009, 17:47:43 UTC

Thank you!