[FIC] The Claw Game - Furuba

[miyabita13]

Title: The Claw Game
Author: Miyabita
Characters: Kureno, Machi, Mogeta
Written For: Furuba-Rama Monthly Challenge n' 100_situations
Theme: #54 - Luck
Rating: PG - for mild language and the abuse of a toy vending machine XD
Summary: In which Kureno learns why you should never fall asleep on park benches.
Warnings: Spoilers up through chapters 97/98 of

Comments

[geartemis]

So cute! I adore both Machi and Kureno to pieces. ^_^ Great fic.

[miyabita13]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it! ^^ Heh, Kureno and Machi are pretty adorable in their own respective ways. ^_^

[umadoshi]

*grins* This was a lot of fun! *^^*

[miyabita13]

Thanks, Ysa! First fic where I didn't have Kureno angsting. XD (This time it was the machine's turn to angst. XD)

[f_ireworks]

Oh, how lovely!! This goes to my memories :-D

[miyabita13]

I'm so glad you liked it. ^^ *hugs*

[snapdragon76]

This is very cute. And Kureno shouldn't feel so bad. I suck at those games too.

And I thought the structure was very good. I didn't really notice any mistakes or anything. It flowed very well.

Good job!

[miyabita13]

Thank you! ^^

Lol... I don't think I've ever won anything in those games. I always hit the buttons too early. ^^;;

[snapdragon76]

My step-sister actually won something from one of them one time. I had to pay her in order to get it even though it was technically my turn...

[eletriarnation]

^____________^

Aaah, this goes to MY memories too. *<333* Gawd. You have to be to hottest person alive to write adorable stuff like this, Mel. Seriously, I love you so much for actually doing it--you have no idea how much I fangirled after I disappeared off YM that night. (>.> Sorry about that... I was having Mom trouble again.)

Machi wants me to write some sort of sister-fic/continuation piece... so you might be seeing that sometime in the future. (I guess I get the donut baton passed to me, ne? ^___^ I totally still want to stick those two in a Dunkin Donuts. XD)

Again, I love this to utter pieces. I don't know why you worried about writing Machi, you did it perfectly. <33 *hugs* Thank you so much.

[miyabita13]

Hehe... I'm glad you liked it. XD Kureno was kind of like, "Hey! I'm sure I'm not *that* bad" after I wrote it. ^^ Machi kind of alluded me, which is probably I wrote this from Kureno's POV, since she alluded him, too.

And where's my donut fic?