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[FIC] The Claw Game - Furuba

Sep 01, 2006 01:20

Title: The Claw Game
Author: Miyabita
Characters: Kureno, Machi, Mogeta
Written For: Furuba-Rama Monthly Challenge n' 100_situations
Theme: #54 - Luck
Rating: PG - for mild language and the abuse of a toy vending machine XD
Summary: In which Kureno learns why you should never fall asleep on park benches.
Warnings: Spoilers up through chapters 97/98 of ( Read more... )

Comments 21

coastal_spirit September 3 2006, 02:49:39 UTC

This was very cute! Poor Kureno, having Akito's presents get stolen. He's so naive when it comes to the ways of the world, and you present that very effectively. :)

miyabita13 September 13 2006, 20:16:22 UTC

Yay! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! This was probably the first no-angst!Kureno thing I've put out, so I'm glad that so many people enjoyed it. XD

lunnera September 7 2006, 07:09:58 UTC

Kinda cute~ although I can't quite picture the look on Akito's face when being presented with a Mogeta plush.

miyabita13 September 13 2006, 20:15:35 UTC

Thanks! Well... there's a sketch in volume 17 (I think that's the right volume) of Kureno and Akki together, and I think the text above it says something like, "Akki likes Mogeta". I'd have to double check again, but I think that's what prompted me to have Kureno give her a Mogeta plush. XD

helga_b September 10 2006, 13:56:21 UTC

Oh, this is wonderful! I have a soft spot for fic starring characters who never really get a chance to interact in canon, and this was done so well. Loved it. :)

miyabita13 September 13 2006, 20:17:21 UTC

Your icon is so appropriate. ^_~

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ^^

rabidfangirl67 September 25 2006, 00:23:42 UTC

How cute! I adore Machi to pieces, as I do Kureno. But there's hardly any fanfiction written on them! So I was so happy to discover this!

I can't play those games worth a flip, and I never win anything from them.

This is so cute, it's added to memories!

miyabita13 October 12 2006, 03:59:10 UTC

Late reply... my apologies. *bows repeatedly* ^^;;

I'm so glad you liked it! ^^ I love Kureno to pieces; wish there was more fanfiction out there focused on him.

And yeah, those games hate me. I never win. ^^

rabidfangirl67 October 12 2006, 21:31:08 UTC

Teehee. ^^ Kureno is overlooked. ;_;

miyabita13 October 15 2006, 21:29:04 UTC

*places a big spotlight on Kureno so that everyone sees him*

XDD