Domino - SasuxNaru fic

[miximel]

Ok this one here is rated for language, no smexing what-so-ever happens in this little ficlet. This was inspired a couple nights ago as I was falling asleep. Our little black kitten loves to attack our feet when they stick outside the blanket, he's a complete brat. So for whatever reason, while my feet were under attack, I thought "Oh, wouldn't it

Comments

[penguin88]

Yum. I love the idea of this fic. You're right - you might want to polish it a bit - but I think that the idea and some of the lines here are just perfect! I especially love the flashback scene, but that might just be because I'm a total sucker for jealous!Sasuke. But really, I love the pacing in that conversation and the gradual build up of tension. And the way that Naruto is being sneaky without even realizing it :).

The whole premise of this fic is a great one - that Sasuke has trouble letting go in front of other people. His solitude and wariness are both essential to his personality, and you show that well.

Thank you for writing and for sharing!