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Oct 27, 2009 00:33

SO. I wrote this fic, and it's pretty much just about SHINee riding around, lost in Los Angeles after a day of shopping and they're late for the Korean Music Festival (which I guess they WERE late to? because they were shopping? lol idk I heard they were shopping) so they need to get there, but nobody seems to care much except for the manager. and ( Read more... )

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taengoo October 27 2009, 13:56:06 UTC
oh god oh god oh god, i think just fell in love.

LMFAO

okay, quotin' time.

and Jinki stood there chewing his lip, his escalating state of nervousness becoming a cause of concern to Jonghyun and Minho. Jinki was usually pretty calm, but ever since they'd been in America he'd been something of a nervous wreck. He probably thought they were going to be shot, or something equally silly and dramatic, and it would be all his fault.
NERVOUS BREAKDOWN ONEW IS LIKE MY NEW FAVORITE THING NOW.

and Jonghyun figured they had just reached Minho's for the second time that day.
k for some reason, that is very very hot.
breaking point!Ho... do want.

"This belt is about as important as my life, Minho. My Life."
his life, mel. HIS LIFE.

He looked like he desperately wanted to be anywhere but there, and Jonghyun felt exactly the same.
THIS. THIS SO HARD. if i were stuck in a car with key, i would be looking for a gun, or a rope, or actually just throw myself out of the car. lmao.

"Taemin, Emma Watson is British, what would she be doing in America ( ... )

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miximel October 27 2009, 21:39:53 UTC
OMG. this comment. cryinggg aslfkjsdklfj this is like, maybe the longest comment I've ever gotten for a fic and it's so pretty and I love it and ilu. ♥

what taemin in a trunk lmaooo girl. XD mafia!shinee? :O definitely one day, when I'm a better writer, it sounds fun~

thank you so much, and what are talking about disabling comments omg it's comments like this that make people wanna write more, it's awesome. *_*

AND WHAT YOU DON'T LIKE KEY. omg. I should go about fixing that because he's fabulous and all HBIC with the rest of SHINee and he likes Lady Gaga and looking at fashion magazines and he has this totally obvious crush on Jonghyun and takes suggestive photos with waterguns and aldklsfjkl ;_; I mean...it's Key. D: /faints

okay so omg I love you. :( ♥

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taengoo October 27 2009, 21:49:10 UTC
*wipes tears like a sap*

BAWWWW <33333 i take pride in having the longest! MWAHAHA *fierce face*

takes suggestive photos with waterguns
I SAW THAT TODAY AND IMMEDIATELY TWEETED IT HAHAHA i laughed for like, several minutes, wondering what the hell that was, if i just imagined that. like omfg what a mindfuck.

i liked key back during yunhanam, cause he was less obnoxious-bitch and more like a mother-hen that would break out in all his bitchdom when shit got serious. XD
that, and he had that atrocious blonde hair for like, fucking ever, and now its finally gone and he is slightly redeemed XD

i love you too bb!

get cracking on MAFeeA (oh god how lame am i)

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miximel October 27 2009, 22:38:52 UTC
LOL, oh you. ♥

omfg that picture slfkdjf WHAT, KEY, WHAT. I also love how in the making-of video, while that photo is being taken, Jonghyun is right there practically front-and-center lmao.


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hp_groupie October 27 2009, 13:57:59 UTC
"What the fuck, no, you should not open the door," Kibum yelled, turning and putting an arm over the seat, staring at Jinki. "Get it together, Jinki, you're not the only one having a hard time - don't cry, don't cry - and oh my god, we are not going to die. Unless this little psychopath over here kills us all, which isn't a stretch at this point. And stop with that weird smile, Taemin, because I will put you in the trunk, do not test me. You may be stupid - shut your mouth, Minho, don't even say anything - but I won't let you be weird on top of being mentally challenged like Jonghyun."

THIS SUMMARIZES THE WHOLE THING. XD

I'VE NEVER LAUGHED OUT LOUD SO MANY TIMES IN A FIC.

OMG...I'M STILL LAUGHING.

I'M MEMMING THIS OMG. XDDDDDD

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miximel October 27 2009, 21:41:53 UTC
You like, have no idea how happy that makes me. T-T I've always wanted to write a funny bandfic but didn't think I could, but I actually managed to make people laugh and ldfkjadklf so happy. Thank youuuu ♥♥♥

and omg worth a mem? *_*

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hp_groupie October 28 2009, 02:04:22 UTC
worth a mem!? YES! XD

My XD emoticons are literal. I like to laugh. And you...you've made me laugh.

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r_hr_maniac October 27 2009, 14:55:09 UTC
You, Choi Minho, are a cockblocker. best. line. ever. ♥

"You look hot when you take charge." and I saw the part from Chin Chin radio where Jonghyun had that "come hither" look on his face while they were lipsynching to Get Down. Just, uh ♥

KEYBER. I can totally imagine Amber teaching Key how to be a fierce bitch in English.

But Taemin wins the whole fanfic, seriously.

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miximel October 27 2009, 21:48:18 UTC
lol, he's kind of my favorite cockblocker. :3 omg I think Keyber might be the best thing to happen in fandom since Jonghyun's hair, so I really hope to incorporate it into fics more often. *_*

I think I kind of love writing Taemin, idk. :D

thank you! ♥

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quinnsan October 27 2009, 15:55:59 UTC
gtfo cockblocker Minho, JongKey needs their ~private~ time. D=

But seriously, this was so awsome, and something that I think would actually happen too. <3333

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miximel October 27 2009, 21:51:36 UTC
lmao, but he's an awesome cockblocker, bb. :'D

dflgfjgkl thank you so much~ ♥♥

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quinnsan October 28 2009, 03:24:25 UTC
...I can't argue with that, its so true. :D

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black_goose October 27 2009, 16:16:32 UTC
TAEMIN IS MY FAVOURITE THING -- oh, things I never thought I'd say. I love how he's just this little kid who is such a brat. ACTUALLY, NO, I TAKE IT BACK, my favourite part is Onew's mini-break down, his OHMYGOD I CAN'T FEEL MY ARM I'M DYING GUYS made me laugh so hard that I probably damaged something and will need surgery.

And those last four lines didn't help matters either :DDDDDD

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miximel October 27 2009, 22:21:55 UTC
omg but taemin is precious :( I totally imagine him as this manipulative little brat who secretly tries to control stuff, while hiding behind a bright, almost blank smile that everyone just mistakes for innocence. LOL onew, it was fun writing him like that, even though my image of him is totally laid-back and almost detached.

I'm glad you liked it, omg. thank you! ♥

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