Chapter 21 Dark Falls

[mithrilquill]

In Chapter 21: Dark Falls we find out what the Malfoys' punishment was for letting Harry, Ron, Hermione, and the other prisoners escape Malfoy Manor and the world gets a whole lot darker for a lot of our characters...

Comments

[mm_masked_one]

Wow. Just read chapter 22. Still suffering from chills. I'm so, so, so glad to see the boys deciding to DO something. Ginny is great. It's so infuriating the way her mother and older brothers are treating her, as though she doesn't have every bit as much right to fight in this war as they do. She was possessed in her first year, she was at the department of mysteries fighting in her fourth year. Since Voldemort came back she's probably had as much direct contact with the war as anyone else in her family. I'm glad that Charlie and her dad seem to get it. Celeste is a very intriguing character. I can't wait to find out what role she has to play. I wonder how the other two muggle-born boys are doing

[mithrilquill]

:D Thanks so much for the review, Mask!

I'm very attached to Blaise and Theo as well... glad you're enjoying their bits of the story. Ginny was also really fun to write because of her anger - not a fun situation to be in for her, but it was fun to write it! lol

It's always hard to know if original characters are working or not so I'm really glad you left me some comments about them. I really hope you enjoy reading what I've got in store for Celeste and the other original characters... and I hope you keep letting me know what you think of the story either way!

New chapter very soon and then I think I'll get one of the folks at TDA to make a couple more chapter images for me!

[mm_masked_one]

Oh, wow. So Chapter 23 is very, very full of emotional impact

[mithrilquill]

*evil grin* Love all your questions, but I am not answering a single one now. Although, I must say, one of your questions/comments gave me an idea that I might try to add into a future chapter! Thanks!

Thanks so much for the review!