Chapter 21 Dark Falls

Mar 07, 2013 17:25

In Chapter 21: Dark Falls we find out what the Malfoys' punishment was for letting Harry, Ron, Hermione, and the other prisoners escape Malfoy Manor and the world gets a whole lot darker for a lot of our characters...


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mm_masked_one March 18 2013, 05:48:02 UTC
Oh, wow. So Chapter 23 is very, very full of emotional impact.

What are Blaise and Theo up to?? Was Blaise's mother lying when she said he'd been adopted? If she isn't, does that mean that Blaise might have similar powers to the other Muggleborns? Is Blaise Celeste's brother? Or did Blaise's mother say the things she thought she had to say to clear his mind before he went to Voldemort? He's certainly thinking of something else now. I really, really hope that she chose to tell him that for that reason, and that she's still supporting the boys. I also hope that Blaise doesn't turn to Voldemort in truth now that his mother seems to have rejected him. The suspense, fear, shock, and mystery is really strong with the boy's plotline.

The bit with Luna is the best. I'm glad somebody is learning to pay attention to her. I believe she might be on to something when it comes to getting rid of the Dementors, though I wonder if she might need Celeste's help. Celeste seems to be a sort of anti-dementor at the moment, casting cheering charms on the children and helping to bolster Remus' wavering hope as well.

This was another great chapter!

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mithrilquill March 24 2013, 17:48:33 UTC
*evil grin* Love all your questions, but I am not answering a single one now. Although, I must say, one of your questions/comments gave me an idea that I might try to add into a future chapter! Thanks!

Thanks so much for the review!

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