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FIC: Two Forms, One Soul (Epilogue)

Jul 25, 2009 19:25

Title: Two Forms, One Soul (Epilogue)
Pairing/Characters: Bruce/Clark, Alfred Pennyworth, Dick Grayson, Tim Drake, J'onn J'onzz, Wonder Woman
Continuity: Animated series, a few years after B:TAS.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce asks his family to come home, informs the JLA of two changes in his status...and practices flying with his lover.
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ch: wonder woman, ch: clark kent, ch: tim drake, ch: alfred pennyworth, ch: dick grayson, ch: j'onn j'onnz, ch: bruce wayne, p: clark/bruce, series: two forms one soul

Comments 87

saavikam77 October 3 2009, 23:25:23 UTC

Guh!!!

Finally got back to reading this, and man, it was *fantastic*!! I so loved the eerie feel of the first few chapters, before Bruce's new 'status' was revealed, Clark's compulsion toward Bruce entwined with his fear. *shivers* So perfect.

And the fight with Fiorella and her minions, man, the surprise of the wings was just right.

And the epilogue... *SO* perfect!! I loved Tim's joking about them getting a room, how it was just one little adjustment for the family, and Bruce's later proposal to Clark, HEE!! XD

*applauds wildly* Awesome story, hon! And Rai's illustrations were such a great compliment. Just WOW!! :D

mithen October 4 2009, 02:49:30 UTC

Eeee, thanks! I had a lot of fun with the building creepiness and compulsion--generally I don't like vampire stories a lot, but with the freedom to pick and choose what I liked from the genre, it was a lot of fun to write. :)

You know, I almost didn't write the epilogue at all? Rai reminded me that I KIND OF had some loose ends to tie up with the Batfamily and League, lol. And wasn't her art amazing? *happy sigh* It was a really fun project to work on...

mapleshade November 29 2009, 22:33:26 UTC

Wow. That is so Batman of Bruce to send all of his loved ones away so he can just die and that's so like Clark to refuse to give up hope. I love that Clark let himself love and that Bruce finally understood that it was Clark's love for him that was enthralling him not the vampire hypnotism. And I have no words to describe the passion or their lovemaking or the bond they have. Wow again.

mithen December 1 2009, 03:02:03 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I had so much fun writing it and having a chance to indulge in the Gothic romantic tropes...Bruce fits them so well, and Clark is so...Clark. :)

kungfunurse December 5 2009, 20:16:18 UTC

When they wrote the three part mini of Batman turning into a vampire, I had only hoped it would be something like this.

You have surpassed everything DC has allowed to be published (as usual) and created a romance of the first order, here. Sexy, intense, and totally true to the characters (IMO). Thanks for this wonderful story!

mithen December 8 2009, 12:10:49 UTC

WHAT was that Blood Reign junk anyway? Man, I read it in increasing states of aghastness (is that a word?) I felt like they threw away everything actually interesting about vampires, lol. This looks like a job for fanfic! :D

I'm really glad you liked it! I think this was one of my favorite things I wrote this year, I just got a chance to relax and work with the cliches and have fun. :)

lishel_fracrium February 4 2010, 01:15:33 UTC

oh wow *adds to memories* that was incredible.

mithen February 5 2010, 14:45:24 UTC

*beams and blushes* Thank you so much!

ladyblkrose May 18 2010, 00:24:51 UTC

Once again, I read through a series without stopping along the way to comment until the end........
WOWDAMNSH*TBABY
This series was so interestingly crafted that even though we the reading audience knew what was going on, you made the reading atmosphere creepy and dark enough that *I* was just caught up in Bruce's dilemma and both of their hunger. and speaking about hunger, wow! Clark's hunger for Bruce, how it pulled him away from Lois, even his fantasy's changed. The dance between the two, the *I need* *I want* *I won't* *I will* push-pull between the two, was so delish. I almost didn't miss the graphic sex. Almost LOL
I squeed through the fight scene loving the fact that Bruce popped open wings to save his Clark from the bad old vampires.
AND AND AND the coming out of both Batman's new status and he and Superman's relationship. Married...damn I loved it so much.
Thank you so damn much for this wonderful ride into another version of the World's Finest

mithen May 19 2010, 04:14:41 UTC

Clark's hunger for Bruce, how it pulled him away from Lois, even his fantasy's changed.

I don't often like to write Clark leaving Lois for Bruce, but I admit I really enjoyed showing his attention shift here. :)

I squeed through the fight scene loving the fact that Bruce popped open wings to save his Clark from the bad old vampires.

I COULD NOT RESIST IT. :) Writing this was one long joyride for me, lol. I'm really glad you liked the results!