FIC: Two Forms, One Soul (4/9)

[mithen]

Title: Two Forms, One Soul (Chapter Four)
Pairing/Characters: Bruce/Clark
Continuity: Animated series, a few years after B:TAS.  (The reference to Crucifer is from the comics, stolen for use here).
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce's vampiric sire pays him a visit and meets Clark.
Word Count: 2000
Warnings: None necessary
Notes: Written for the 20_inkspots

Comments

[theclexfactor]

I knew Bruce wouldn't do it because this is only at the almost-halfway point, the rising action and not the climax, but still, I hoped. It's probably wrong to hope, but it would be so hot, lol.

You continue to blow me away with this story. I've read vampire!Bruce fic before, but this is so...enthralling in a way that only one other has done for me. Hmm, enthralling...I'm keeping my eye on you. *raises eyebrow*

[mithen]

I knew Bruce wouldn't do it because this is only at the almost-halfway point, the rising action and not the climax, but still, I hoped. It's probably wrong to hope, but it would be so hot, lol.

*sings* If biting you is wrong, baby, I don't want to be right... *grin*

I did a lot of research for this story, trying to figure out what I liked about the myths and what didn't appeal to me. It was an oddly abstract process (and involved reading "Twilight" for research!), but eventually I felt like I knew what I liked in the genre enough to really enjoy writing it. And then I just had a lot of fun. :) I'm glad to hear it shows though! I was pretty enthralled writing it as well...I was holed up in a hotel room most of the time, typing furiously... *happy memories*

[r3nlock]

i gotta ask, what was the other story that you liked so much? i just read this one over and over again and now i'm hooked, but i just don't have much luck finding vampire bruce.

[mithen]

*beams* Thank you! I don't usually do anything close to horror and I wasn't sure I could get it across well, but I certainly had fun trying...

[kawahori]

Finally! I'm waiting for update since yesterday, and now I can't wait to read the next chapter! *greedy*

"You just let her go!" he snarled at Bruce.

*hug Bruce, and give Clark a kick...Ouch!*

I wonder what will happen when Bruce finally gives in...*shudder*

[mithen]

*hug Bruce, and give Clark a kick...Ouch!*

Clark grumbles in protest! He's cranky for some reason right now... :D

I wonder what will happen when Bruce finally gives in...*shudder*

I'm glad the suspense is working for now! *crosses fingers for later* Thanks so much for the comment!

[kawahori]

You're such a wonderful writer! Not only because your works are great, but also you respond to your readers warmly. You even reply in super-speed! *happy*

*back to topic* I'm getting worried for the boys. In JLA: Crisis of Conscience, Bruce doubted Selina because her love might not be her choice. Now Bruce himself has the power to affect others' minds. Will he be too paranoid/stubborn to believe that Clark's feelings is of his own free will? Ah, angst!

I LOVE happy endings. Please, please don't torture them...too much. *grin*

p.s. Sorry for my poor grammar...*blush*

[mithen]

You even reply in super-speed! *happy*

*grin* I wish I always could! I hate when I have comments to answer and no time to get to them...

In JLA: Crisis of Conscience, Bruce doubted Selina because her love might not be her choice. Now Bruce himself has the power to affect others' minds. Will he be too paranoid/stubborn to believe that Clark's feelings is of his own free will? Ah, angst!

That is a really good point! It's funny, because I hadn't thought about that aspect much at first, but recently I was editing and added a line about that as well, so we're on the same wavelength there.

And your grammar is great! No worries there!

[ctbn60]

I was really enraptured reading this. I hate Fiorella the bitch. How dare she turn our Bruce! I give him a lot of props because I can see how hard the pull is. Especially after he told Clark how he effects him. I can’t wait for more and I am really looking forward to see what path your Bruce and Clark take. I’m trying not to think of the options and just enjoy the flow of the fic. I do have to tell you how hot Clark offering his neck to Bruce was. It also spoke volumes about his feelings for the man. Things are so complicated for them I just want to hug the both of them.

[mithen]

I really enjoyed creating Fiorella--something about a totally narcissistic, evil immortal was oddly fun to write. :)

I give him a lot of props because I can see how hard the pull is. Especially after he told Clark how he effects him.

The story's a little slow to get into Bruce's POV, so I'm glad his thirst came across in this chapter.

And uh...yeah, Clark freely offering--even demanding--was one of my favorite things to write. Aggressive vampire victims for the win, lol! Glad you're liking it!

[northernwalker]

Weirdly enough, a vampire Bruce is a good companion for Clark. Who knows how long a Kryptonian will live? Theoretically, vampires can live forever, so they won't be lonely.

Poor boys.

[mithen]

That may, in fact, be a point Clark brings up later. :D And yes, it does make them an unusually well-suited possible pair, doesn't it? It's kind of...weirdly romantic, in a way...