FIC: Onisius of Gotham (Pretender Crossover)

[mithen]

Title:  Onisius of Gotham
Pairing/Characters: Batman, Nightwing, Catwoman, Oracle, Lucius Fox, Alfred Pennyworth, Jarod, Broots, Miss Parker, Sydney
Rating: PG
Summary: When the Centre loses their pet Pretender, they send Miss Parker and Sydney to Gotham to find him.  Meanwhile, Bruce Wayne realizes his newest mechanical engineer might not be quite

Comments

[marag]

Typing one-handed, so...Ooooooooooh! Awesome :)

[seiberwing]

...do tell me you just hurt your hand or something. O_O

[marag]

::laughs:: Now that I'm two-handed again, I can say that I was holding my baby in one arm :D

[seiberwing]

Okay, that makes me feel worlds better. *waves to your icon baby*

[northern_star]

hehehe! Awesome! :)

Love how she's making a mention of Greek things, and then the next scene Bruce is, too. And then the conversation about Selina. hehehe! :D Cut it out." LOL! And Ooooh how I love Batman when all he says is "Hm." reminds me of an ep of TAS - one of my favs. ;)

(haven't had time to finish reading, have to run to the office, but I didn't want to forget to mention these... I'll be back later with more...)

[mithen]

Ooooh how I love Batman when all he says is "Hm." reminds me of an ep of TAS - one of my favs. ;)

It's funny you say that! I couldn't really have it be TAS because I so wanted to have Oracle there, but besides Oracle it all felt very TAS to me, right down to a blond Selina somehow. :) I'm glad that came through!

[northern_star]

Finally back...

Miss Parker calling Alfred Jeeves, then Mr. Belvedere totally cracked me up. :) And I think I probably clapped and cheered like an idiot (than goodness for being alone in this hotel room) when I saw Nightwing talking about the lions from the circus - teehee! That was too cute! :D

Loved the part where Parker almost catches Jarod, but then fails (of course) because this is one of the things I really liked in the first few seasons (at least, how I remember it) is that he always let them real close to him and then managed to escape. Oh, how I loved Jarod! :D

And heee!!! Broots thinks Oracle is a man - but Parker thinks not. haha! Ok, this was excellent!! :D

This, btw, screams sequel(s)... ;)

[mithen]

And I think I probably clapped and cheered like an idiot (than goodness for being alone in this hotel room) when I saw Nightwing talking about the lions from the circus - teehee! That was too cute! :D

I really liked the idea of Dick being all "Hey, it's my old buddies the toothless lions!" :D

Loved the part where Parker almost catches Jarod, but then fails (of course) because this is one of the things I really liked in the first few seasons (at least, how I remember it) is that he always let them real close to him and then managed to escape. Oh, how I loved Jarod! :D

Jarod was surprisingly easy to write (well, discussions of mechanical engineering aside, not that he did much of that!)--he's got so much enthusiasm and passion and anger in him and he's just bubbling over with it all. I actually think he and Dick would have gotten along really well if they'd had more time...

[mithen]

Selina insisted on being in this story--she demanded I find a plot for Jarod that got her involved just so she could smirk at Miss Parker. :) She found Jarod terribly cute. I really enjoyed writing the crossover--somehow it all meshed nicely once I got going. Glad you liked it!

[seiberwing]

Eeee. I'm not aware of the background of the Centre and so on, but the characters are understandable and lovely anyway.

[mithen]

Oh good! It's always a relief to hear that the story hangs together even without the extra background. :) Thanks!

[mithen]

*grin* Thanks! I just had to get Broots and Oracle interacting in there. Someday I bet she gets him a job in Gotham and keeps him and Debbie safe. :)