Comments | mithen: Heroes of the Squared Circle 6: High Flying Moves

mithen

Heroes of the Squared Circle 6: High Flying Moves

Mar 19, 2013 19:13

Title: High Flying Moves
Relationship: Clark/Bruce
Characters: Clark Kent, Bruce Wayne, Selina Kyle
Continuity: Heroes of the Squared Circle, a DC/pro wrestling fusion ( click for notes and all chapters).
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Rating: PG
Word Count 4500
Summary: Clark and Bruce practice their first match together, but there are some problems to ( Read more... )

ch: selina kyle, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce, series: heroes of the squared circle

Comments 25

nyghtrain March 19 2013, 10:52:51 UTC

I loved this match and the dialogue in and out of the ring! The chemistry between the two is absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more of this series.

mithen March 19 2013, 13:41:34 UTC

I am so enjoying the chemistry between these two--it's a real pleasure to write and Bruce is just...really enjoying himself. :)

bradygirl_12 March 19 2013, 16:01:25 UTC

What a fun chapter! You wrote the match well. I enjoyed the back-and-forth and all the business. Clark and Bruce are actors as superheroes, too, with their respective schticks. They're well-versed in this! ;)

Love Selina. I'm glad she gets to be a wrestler, too, because you KNOW she'd be great at it! On one of my DVDs a DC writer says that Catwoman is Batman's equal and it's true. She is worthy of the Bat! ;)

Do you have any idea who her opponent might be? I would say Black Canary but she's probably retired now? The Cat and the Canary would make a great pair! ;)

mithen March 21 2013, 00:56:49 UTC

I enjoyed the back-and-forth and all the business. Clark and Bruce are actors as superheroes, too, with their respective schticks.

It's fascinating how well it works, the private and public sides!

Do you have any idea who her opponent might be? I would say Black Canary but she's probably retired now? The Cat and the Canary would make a great pair! ;)

Oh, but Black Canary's daughter might well be around! I was thinking Vixen, but Dinah's a member of the JLI for a while too, so that would be perfect! *chortles* I'll have to make sure to mention that...

zolac_no_miko March 19 2013, 16:17:24 UTC

My prophetic dream had more in the way of almost-kissing, BUT THIS IS QUITE SATISFACTORY. :D

Yaaaaaaaay Clark, I knew you could do it!

mithen March 21 2013, 00:57:54 UTC

You and Bruce (and I!) all had faith in Clark! *grin*

Bruce is not going to be content with the current level of not-almost-kissing for a whole lot longer, I don't think... :) (Though that might just mean graduating to almost-kissing, darn it!)

queen0fcups March 19 2013, 16:51:37 UTC

SQUEE aaah I love it! I'm so glad you included Selina, her doing the heel valet groin kick and being the only one to explicitly praise him after the match was perfect and adorable. As before, things that remain a constant between Bruces tickle me endlessly, so I love that Clark's supposed to take 'good match' followed by some criticism as a glowing compliment. The match itself flowed very well and was a delight to read!

mithen March 21 2013, 01:00:43 UTC

As before, things that remain a constant between Bruces tickle me endlessly, so I love that Clark's supposed to take 'good match' followed by some criticism as a glowing compliment.

Is that not so Bruce? He made me laugh and shake my head with exasperation there. Writing Selina was fun, yay! She sort of moseyed into the chapter and enjoyed herself. :)

jestana March 19 2013, 17:54:44 UTC

*claps* YAY! I hoped this chapter would be up soon! I dreamt about it, except Bruce and Clark were in their Batman and Superman costumes and there was a baby involved somehow. *stares at brain* Your version is much better and I like that their match worked a little differently from Clark's with Guy. They didn't have to whisper moves to each other, they just did them. And I loved Selina getting a say, too, and getting to knee Clark. :D Best of all, though, is the end with them already thinking of the next match. *giggle* BRAVO!

mithen March 21 2013, 01:34:00 UTC

You're the second person to tell me you dreamed about this AU! 0_0 I shall take that as a sign I'm doing something right (or that wrestling is so striking visually it's easy to dream about, lol). I'm giggling at the idea of a baby crawling around the ring now!

They didn't have to whisper moves to each other, they just did them.

Oh yay, I'm glad that came through! Yes, they've got a real gift for being able to put together a match without having to talk about it, mostly. Some pairs of wrestlers are really good at that, it seems!

And they're always looking forward to the next match, I love that about them. *beams*

jestana March 21 2013, 03:56:09 UTC

I didn't help I'd just re-read the previous chapter before going to sleep. :D Clark was holding the baby and trying to protect it. IDEK Stupid brain.

And I also loved that Clark did the hurricana and it worked!

There was something else I was going to mention, but now it's slipped my mind. Oy.