Full Metal Alchemist, "Orphans," Jean/Roy, NC-17

May 18, 2006 11:10

I swore I wouldn’t write manga!Jean, but I’ve gone and done it in this story. Still haven’t actually read the manga, though, so just kind of take the timeline wherever you think it fits. This is a very personal story, so it may not appeal to everyone, but I hope some of you will like it, all the same ( Read more... )

roy, fanfiction, havoc's mom, havoc, nc-17, fma

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onyx_shinigami May 18 2006, 16:37:51 UTC
That is both sad and sweet. I liked it. ^^ (I don't read the manga yet either (well, up to book 6 in english)).

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mistr3ssquickly May 19 2006, 18:50:25 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, sweetie! I personally won't read the manga because it's too angsty, but sometimes the angst has to sneak into my stuff, because ... well, I don't know why.

Thank you for reading this! I'm glad you liked it!

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pockygirl May 18 2006, 16:44:10 UTC
"I'm Fuhrer over all of Amestris, Jean," Roy said. "Your mother's home is a part of our country. I'll be here as long as it takes."
This was beautiful. very sad, but.. &hearts &hearts

There's more stuff floating around in my head about thid, but it's refusing to be elucidated, so just &hearts for now.

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mistr3ssquickly May 19 2006, 18:51:38 UTC
*pets you* I'm glad you liked this, even through the layers of angst, dear. I'll write something fluffy next, you know me.

*hugs* Thank you for reading me!

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gretchen8642 May 18 2006, 18:54:54 UTC
aw!!! that was so sad and so sweet and so... like.... hot.

haha you pwned me again! i was actually crying at the begining but i already told you that.. hm. well once again, it was excellent!!!!!!! so yes! you and your amazing royhavoc fics have once again made my afternoon. go you!!

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mistr3ssquickly May 19 2006, 19:00:37 UTC
Haha, a mix of everything, eh? I'm really glad you liked it dear, especially since it made you cry! I'd apologize, but ... well, that was what I was going for, so yay?

*hugs* Thanks for reading!

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chrstphrl May 18 2006, 19:21:42 UTC
Oh my, you brought tears to my eyes. This is so sweet and there's such a gentleness between them. I love Jean talking about Breda too. *snuggles* This made a fucked up day better.

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mistr3ssquickly May 19 2006, 19:27:09 UTC
I'm glad you liked this, hon. Breda and Jean's friendship is one of my very favorite aspects of the Jean/Roy pairing, more so than the main pairing itself, I'll have to confess.

*hugs* I'm glad this made your day better!

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That was so sweet... havocmangawip May 18 2006, 21:12:21 UTC
It was also gorgeous. Your description of Roy's POV and Jean's POV re his Mother... WOW.

Poor Jean, such a "Mama's Boy". Thankfully he has Roy. Truly, this was beautiful. Memming.

You have to spoil Galux more. XD As you writing to spoil Galux, spoils ME in turn. (Just one more?) Loved that part. Jean does get his own way an awful lot. It's the puppy dog look.

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Re: That was so sweet... mistr3ssquickly May 19 2006, 19:30:20 UTC
Jean very much is a Momma's boy ... I can see him desperately needing Roy after her death.

Hahaha, I will indeed spoil Galux plenty more, she feeds me the most delicious Roy/Jean porn. Jean's puppydog look makes the world go round, and it generally makes more fiction happen.

I'm glad you liked this, dear! Thank you for reading it. ^_^

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